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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. headsick123

    headsick123 Senior Member

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    SHEM- keep it simple and straight, make all your letters the same size and dont worry about fill or background yet. get rid of that long ass tail on the S and get rid of the tail thing on the H and just keep it simple i think it would look 100X better.
     
  2. Epoc

    Epoc Senior Member

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  3. StayHyE

    StayHyE Senior Member

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  4. StayHyE

    StayHyE Senior Member

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    ai35.tinypic.com_2uy3oee.jpg

    cleaned up some of the lines..
     
  5. headsick123

    headsick123 Senior Member

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    dont mind the writing, but heres another JOINS simple i did.

    ai16.photobucket.com_albums_b32_headsick123_JOINS2.jpg
     
  6. suparjafar

    suparjafar Senior Member

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    fuck the arrows. looks solid though
     
  7. headsick123

    headsick123 Senior Member

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    ARMEN- you need to make your letters the same thickness, and stick to caps, you got one lowercase and it looks wack, also your shaddow is all screwy, i know nobody likes to hear this, but you gotta keep it simple. it looks the most clean and it will eventually develop into something better you like a lot more.
     
  8. RADAWG

    RADAWG Senior Member

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    Some pen shit I did in class
    ai207.photobucket.com_albums_bb33_skateboard23_Photo175.jpg
     
  9. RedEyes

    RedEyes Elite Member

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  10. StayHyE

    StayHyE Senior Member

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    'keep it simple..' that all i hear theres no description of exactly what i need to do...keep to simple could mean anything can you be more specific plz
     
  11. BigBlueViolence

    BigBlueViolence Elite Member

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    What ever you were high on when you did that top piece,
    stop doing it forever, that shit can't be good for your health.
     
  12. gumOnShoe

    gumOnShoe Elite Member

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    oh, i tried to make the S E biggest btw, so it'd be SnorE sort of, is that what you ment?
     
  13. RedEyes

    RedEyes Elite Member

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    Lol it was just an idea i had to put down on paper nothing special.
     
  14. suparjafar

    suparjafar Senior Member

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    yes
     
  15. LeaksOne

    LeaksOne Elite Member

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    ra your throw is fine but that simp is out of whack.
    sico the bottom piece is better but the o on it is oddly shaped
    joins dont do that heart over your I unless your a girl or its for a girl and that random arrow on the o is terrible. lose it. and make all your letters the same size

    ive been fuckin around with my new name.....
    ai521.photobucket.com_albums_w335_jokster004_STP60048.jpg

    ai521.photobucket.com_albums_w335_jokster004_STP60049.jpg

    ai521.photobucket.com_albums_w335_jokster004_STP60050.jpg

    ai521.photobucket.com_albums_w335_jokster004_STP60051.jpg

    its amazing how you never notice how bad your shit is until you post it...crits??
    and i didnt ink any of these becasue im not very satisfied with any of them
    and this is my new method of sketching. fuck clean lnes for now
     
  16. RedEyes

    RedEyes Elite Member

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    The second last one has the most potential.
     
  17. cocacola

    cocacola Senior Member

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    ^ yess i dont like the way the s is shape 0.0
    valley of golden death
    afarm3.static.flickr.com_2603_3972292919_d9b8383d8a.png afarm3.static.flickr.com_2657_3972292985_1c89d1e147.png
    aint done yet
     
  18. BowlesNuevitas

    BowlesNuevitas Member

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  19. -Empty-Can-

    -Empty-Can- Elite Member

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    who the fuck are you? Stop posting fake wack shit. its pretty annoying.
     
  20. LeaksOne

    LeaksOne Elite Member

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    why did you steal that from me? i never gave you permission. fucking trolls