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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. filur

    filur Member

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  2. *Patch!

    *Patch! Senior Member

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    that throw isnt bad but on the piece you need to try and keep all your bars the same width and it'd probably come out looking better, also try not to have the U overlap the bottom of the L so much, and you should round the R because most of your bars are curved so it'd just flow better. And dont worry about arrows and extensions, they're over rated anyways. I know it sounds like im being hard on you but im just tryng to help out
     
  3. TheToy

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  4. -Empty-Can-

    -Empty-Can- Elite Member

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    feelin the second one. letters could use a bit more curve thoguh
     
  5. Gatsoi

    Gatsoi Senior Member

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    Other than the arrows I like the first one a lot filur.

    ai880.photobucket.com_albums_ac9_gatsoi_hhgfbvbvn.jpg
    Is this cute?
     
  6. drOping

    drOping Senior Member

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    filur-why is the hole so small on the R? fix that NOW!!
    Gatsoi-if that says grim...well i just can hardly read it....go for a more clean look
     
  7. Willis1989

    Willis1989 Senior Member

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  8. filur

    filur Member

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    Thanks guys, Ill keep that in mind :)
     
  9. Willis1989

    Willis1989 Senior Member

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    Went a wee bit simpler here, wot you guys think?

    ai815.photobucket.com_albums_zz72_willis1690_DSC00264.jpg_4a2d27f7796c756b6f1ee5879a05252c.jpg
     
  10. *Patch!

    *Patch! Senior Member

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    yeah gatsoi that looks more like it says Groy or somthing. your I overlaps too much
     
  11. FlippingChickens

    FlippingChickens Banned

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  12. Cyto Aka Son1c

    Cyto Aka Son1c Elite Member

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    TOFE- stick to simple, no extension peices , I mean really everytime you try and add flare to your shit it fails miserably. All your stuff is awkward and not pleasant to look at. Just work on those letters man.

    MEko- awesome, TOFE needs to get influenced from the work you've been putting out, your stuff is so legit.

    and here's something that's unfinished.. can't figure out what I want to do with the R and what to use as a fill.

    ai27.tinypic.com_p4x1v.jpg
     
  13. Cyto Aka Son1c

    Cyto Aka Son1c Elite Member

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  14. Zookyook

    Zookyook Elite Member

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    do that same piece but lose every arrow and itll look betta
     
  15. Phillip McDougall

    Phillip McDougall Elite Member

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    D looks like a lowercase A, and the S should be round
     
  16. nickstix

    nickstix Senior Member

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    I know its sloppy but I was sketching it just quick to get the idea down...
    View attachment 574443

    crits?
     
  17. LeaksOne

    LeaksOne Elite Member

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    Cyto that R needs some reworking
     
  18. FlippingChickens

    FlippingChickens Banned

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  19. No_TomorroW

    No_TomorroW Member

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    Tofe
    The 2nd scetch is nice man. But i don't like that mid. bar on F.
     
  20. xXABEONEXx

    xXABEONEXx Senior Member

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