fresh drop ^^

 

first time i try a throw crits please

 

why is there only 3D on the bottom?

 

and why do you have your short shorts crotch on the paper?

 

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my crotch aside, crits on the actual throw, and im fixing the whole 3d only at bottom thing right now i didnt realize it

EDIT: added 3d at top now please crit

 

not diggin the big hole in the P. i feel like your individual letters are too spread out.

 

the big hole in the P is ugly, and that dot in the dot of the i is weird but it has something!

 

thats not a throw yo

 

did these 2 while waiting to pay some bills so they are a bit sloppy, just posting them to see if letter type and placement are better this time. also decided to do a lower case E on one of them to see how it looks like

 

youre basically doing more straight letters, just shittily proportioned. go on flickr or google or this forum and look up some throws

 

dont buldge the letters

 

gonna try a few more but before i do, quick question should i stick to lower case E or capital?

 

depends on what you like. Go peep game at the throwie battle thread and look at what a good throw looks like. If you still dont know after that, go look at nouveaup's posts

 

i went through the past 30 or 40 pages of this thread i think i got a better idea here are 2 i just did, please crit and tell me which one is better if any. ill then work on that one and do a better version

 

2nd one is way better, but the extension on the P and the E killllll it

 

ok ill eliminate the extension on the P but i honestly dont know what you mean with the extension on the E considering its more or less an elongated square

 

Have you considered sticking to all upper or all lower case letters?. The best two tips I ever got were keep you letters all the same case and to keep your letters all the same size. Or at least be aware of these factors.

 

fuckin stoned, no seriousness. crits though the hand is fun

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