You're going to poop on me?

 

Better or worse than it was before?

 

better than before, lose the line through the O and just play with making the letters more consistent

 

Aww the line through the o is my steez lol. I will see what it looks like without. Thanks so much for the crits. Its nice to have people actually help instead of just saying you're a toy.

 

steez is something you develop not just have lol

 

i was born with steeze
(not really)

 

flic for talk and crits on my handstyle i guess

 

jerman
I put a ER at the end to spice it up a bit... not too happy with it but I think its got potential. Thoughts?

 

I like, not fond of the loop to arrow

 

yea i wished i didnt do it right after haha

 

Halo. Do this. ASAP. 500 times.

 

Reposting, because I didn't get any crits last time.

 

I dig it, but bring down the left leg of the A, its doin somethin weird to the overall balance and makes the A look like a 4, maybe do the same with the M, its less noticeable in that though

 

HHad to move quick as shit for this one

 

nice 1 mone always love some drips too

 

Hip3: Your b's are inconsistant up top and the bottom is booty. All the letters are boxy, but the a. Your d and b (seeing as they are nearly the same letter.) should be more uniform. Keep it up though you're makin' headway.

 

mone-thats clean and sick, nice suttle drips too
hipe i like ur first B with the boxy top, if u made the A match it it would be dope. nice write though it looks good

 

your fucking wackest halo fan ever, what the fuck is that? a highlighter around your tag??? your mom might think its nice and hang it on the fridge for you but in reality she and everyone else knows its shit just write it like a normal fucking person maybe you might get one thing right in your life