Rek - The clouds look more like sperm to me. Or maybe it was sperm. Anyways, the R is smaller on some spots like klic said and the K legs are too small. Work on that bro.
I felt like everything on that last page was hurting pretty bad. except for janek. I REALLY like the Three letter. I REALLY want to see that painted. For the rest of the stuff nothing really caught my attention. Ive been lurking around the big boy forum and stole some styles. The S I stole from someone and the rest is off the top of my head, I like the style of the S and will tweak it alot befor I try to paint it
weakfingers...loooking alot better from the last time i saw your stuff.loke how you show the t for once lol. rek-it has potential.
weakfingers- I think you need to open the top part of the S, like this View attachment 487623 Had to change from mes to nems View attachment 487624
Can someone actually give me crits instead of arguing about my name for once... Also I'm from Australia were most ppl are too dumb to know of kerse. I will change my name when I get a better one though.
thanks, i might paint it tommorow, i'll post some flicks if i do. your throws looking good except for the Q. id use a k instead if i were you
[Broken External Image]:http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0625090128.jpg Crits? Squint- Thats looking hell of a lot better, I agree with Janek though it might look better with the K. Nems- Keep working on it and make your letters all the same size, Your N is bigger then the rest of your letters and your E is the smallest/ Rek- It's a pretty nice simple, make the right leg of your K thicker and longer. Dozer- I like it except the Z and the R, they just dont go with the rest of the letters. Reny- That yellow simple is pretty cool.
klic-I like it, just like most of the throws I've seen from you. Reny- Not really feeling the E or Y, but I know they can be pretty frustrating. weakfingers-Just lose the notch on the S, as everyone else said. I would like to see a K too, but I like it the way it is. cemo954- The hole in the R is a little too big towards the right side, which causes it to look a bit skinny. Maybe just shrink it a bit. provinT13-I like it, but I feel that the E and S should have some sort of opening as well. Zarb-I'm feelin' it. And now, for my crappy throws...
Eark- your K looks a lot like the one I use for exchanges and shit. aren't you that ***** that straight up bit the handy I did for you? [Broken External Image]:http://img200.imageshack.us/img200/7430/photo20w.jpg done in May. Squint- not feeling those lines you do inside the I and T, but it's clean.
Yeah I got the K from the exchange with you, I wanna keep using it and trying to tweak it but if it's not cool with you I'll drop it.
http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/DSC00504.jpg my [direct photo] links for phtobucket aren't working...fucking limited bandwith But check the link out anyways. CRITS: kurse: DROP THE GOD DAMN FUCKING NAME!!!!! FFFFFUUUUCCCCC---- Flert: The drawn one is hella nice, drop the face on your painted throw though... Zarb: fag
a thousand thank yous in your face bbv and I did it with no shorts on I was sketched out thinking i was gonna step on a needle or like, step on someones corpse. but between the fill, the outline and the forcefield I would come out of the water to hit some hash in a hookah we had brought. I didn't even go with graff friends either, just normal friends. and my friend drew this with some hardcore he bought: http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/DSC00506.jpg Not the greatest flick, but its le lock ness monster and it stretched out to about 20 meters long