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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. suparjafar

    suparjafar Senior Member

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    weee simpler...not really idk
     

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  2. headsick123

    headsick123 Senior Member

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    like the sico and aenok.

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    CRITTS PLEASEEE!
     
  3. suparjafar

    suparjafar Senior Member

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    j's a bit big, but thats really clean
     
  4. headsick123

    headsick123 Senior Member

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    thanks man, ill have more to come later tonight hopefully!
     
  5. Graffyk

    Graffyk Senior Member

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    Fathem. I think what BBV means is that it takes more than just 2 hours a day for just 3 days. You need to keep practicing for a long time. Don't worry. I'm a bit unclear about how long one should really spend on regular block letters. But i would think 1-2 months minimum. What I've learned from these guys is that just because something appears to look good, to profressional writers who know what they're doing, it looks whack and you just look like a wannabe. Try talking to some of the skilled and experienced members on this board and see what they have to say, find out how long it took them to stay on block letters.

    lol sorry for that long ass thing, i guess i got carried away

    DankNC, i like the second one the best.

    Aenok looking good and simple. The last one's E looks kinda weird though.. not sure why though

    Kem, that looks like a Kejve or Kelve, Don't seperate the bars in one letter unless you make it apparent that it actually is a single letter.

    StayHye the E needs work. And lose the single bubble at the top. it's too lonely D:

    Sico: nice solid letters. But the Arrows seemed forced on. They dont come out at a spot so that it flows. get what im saying? also is it pronounced sicko or psycho?

    Join: i like the Face on the J


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    crit'd the whole fuckin page
     
  6. milk boxx

    milk boxx Senior Member

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    aenok - throws decent, straights need work, take off the little extensions and stuff from your K and try to just simple it out a bit more till you get it locked.
    Kem- at first i thought that said kene.. work on that m, and idk what the fucks up with that handy haha
    Armen - make that shit simpler and work with the bars the same size for now..
    sico - looks like it would be decent if you dropped the arrows

    i havent posted here in a long ass time... first sketch in like a month

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    can i get some decent crits on this, i know i needa somehow make my "I" and "D" flow.. any help?
     
  7. suparjafar

    suparjafar Senior Member

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    well your 1000X plus better than me, but your i is tilted kinda weird IMO

    halp
     

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  8. -Empty-Can-

    -Empty-Can- Elite Member

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    thats probably one of the best ones you've drawn
     
  9. StayHyE

    StayHyE Senior Member

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  10. gumOnShoe

    gumOnShoe Elite Member

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    snaw, your lines are getting cleaner, try to make your middle W bar higher, it fucks w/ the flow. so remember, keeps those lines clean!

    Milk Boxx, not digging the lean your put on your last two letters, stand em' up straight.

    Stay Hye, looks tough, maybe clean up the lines.

    got crits?
    the main focus on the page was the simp on top.
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  11. Jokz

    Jokz Senior Member

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    i dig your S altho im not too fond of the E
     
  12. 408Bomber

    408Bomber Senior Member

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    bump!!!
     
  13. suparjafar

    suparjafar Senior Member

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    snore i like that s alot, but i feel like it doesnt flow with the rest of the letters. i dont know then again you are better than me X1000 but just my input

    bored...raised w bar
     

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  14. RedEyes

    RedEyes Elite Member

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    Milk-i like the S to E symmetry just dont like the top of the E.
    Graff-thanks i see what u mean by forcing the arrows, n its sicko
     
  15. gumOnShoe

    gumOnShoe Elite Member

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    cool, raise it just a tad bit more, also, how would i make it flow? not a wise ass comment, i'm just asking.
     
  16. 408Bomber

    408Bomber Senior Member

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    i need crits dammit!!!
     
  17. shem

    shem Senior Member

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    i suck. ignore that fill tried it, shouldn't have.
     
  18. BowlesNuevitas

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  19. suparjafar

    suparjafar Senior Member

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    well im no expert but i think the s is like long and skinny and the nor in the middle of the also skinny e is kinda dumbfounding. i dont know how to explain it. i feel like theyd be from two different pieces. maybe make the nor in the same style as the s,e
     
  20. dreaken1993

    dreaken1993 Senior Member

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    uhh i dont know what you mean lol