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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Axil

    Axil Senior Member

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    LEWD - dont really like the first one but the 2nd one is sick!

    Critz Please !

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  2. Cider

    Cider Senior Member

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    Photo on 2012-04-25 at 09.20 #2.jpg Photo on 2012-04-25 at 09.20.jpg
    I know its shit but I started like 3 weeks ago
     
  3. PETER

    PETER Elite Member

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    Cider: Go to the new to graffiti thread. All you need for now is there. Read every page.
     
  4. Axil

    Axil Senior Member

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  5. PETER

    PETER Elite Member

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    Axil: Don't worry about color etc. Focus on your letters. Where your loop and right leg meet on your r is too big. The leg coming off the loop is too small and your o is lop sided.
     
  6. Willis1989

    Willis1989 Senior Member

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    I like the characters and the spraycan, keep working those simps and dont worry about it looking to simple, the more simple the better then after a while bend your letters a little or make them italic, but your going the right way about it.
     
  7. Axil

    Axil Senior Member

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    I fixed the R is it any better now :)

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  8. Willis1989

    Willis1989 Senior Member

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    I agree with peter, dont worry about colours too much just now, if you do a piece that you really like then maybe add colour but work on letters mostly, you can do 2 or 3 black and white pieces in the time it takes to do 1 colored
     
  9. Axil

    Axil Senior Member

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    True :)
    Making a video anyone mind if i put some off your work in it ?
     
  10. PETER

    PETER Elite Member

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    It is an improvement.
     
  11. s33on3

    s33on3 Senior Member

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  12. Axil

    Axil Senior Member

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    s33on3 - nice but i say remove the bar and the star on the last "u" on the first one

    Sick Song with some pics off here :)

     
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  13. Mildstyles

    Mildstyles Elite Member

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    Why would you want a 2 lettter nameget some more letters
     
  14. PETER

    PETER Elite Member

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    I wanna have sex
     
  15. dankbudz

    dankbudz Elite Member

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    holy fuck yoiu little shit, you're making me stop posting here. you are not my friend and you will not put my shit on your fucking youtube video. jesus christ.
     
  16. uknowigetup

    uknowigetup Senior Member

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    ^LOL RAGE^

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    Could I get some critz on this? There are mistakes I can see, but suggestions/comments on the flow would be nice. I know I ran off the page...
     
  17. dankbudz

    dankbudz Elite Member

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    shut up, your a gay lil cunt also
     
  18. R3bel1995

    R3bel1995 Senior Member

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    Yeah bro, you gotta ask EACH person before you put their fliks in your video. Otherwise you piss them off. And I agree with dank. Piss off. We are not your "Firends".
     
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  19. cred1384

    cred1384 Senior Member

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  20. dankbudz

    dankbudz Elite Member

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    too much.. gotta take a step back

    your C looks like an L then a U molded into an R, you have way too many connections and extensions and lines going through your shit, it was started to look nice a few posts back, if refined, but you keep trying to improve, which aint bad but its looking like you are loosing your footing
     
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