Willis - Atm keep your bar width the same, you can especially see that with the T. Rhek - (for the newest piece posted) I think the h would look better if you tapered the bottom edges off like youve done on the r and k. Chad - im agreeing with boomslang on the h, altough i can see why you put it there. never the less sick.
awe- thats sick but make the hole in the a consistent with the rest, lose the ring things on the w, flip the extention on the bottom of the a so its more symmetrical, and work on the top right section of the e. its sick tho chad- make the green fill more consistent, i.e a pattern throughout
heres some of my recent shit, just been tryin random words...almost [Broken External Image]:http://img829.imageshack.us/img829/6412/almostt.jpg and this next one the ink leaked the fuck out on the page, it was rather brutal..lol [Broken External Image]:http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/5811/bruta.jpg
chad: you're the only one i like on this page, throw a drop shadow and a force field around it and you'll be set. View attachment 581133
bottom page bump juice: i feel like all of those are too hectic, simple with some flair is the way to do it kane: keep at it, remember simples! nose2: my boy writes brute and im telling you if you right that the problem you will have is that the BR will flow nice and the UTE will flow nice togther but making the BR flow with the UTE is gonna be hard. go simple. dangeri: simple... alots. do thats. werm: i like the wat you are taking that with the circles, progress that more and it will be dope. rhek: i feel like it's almost to generic like howtodrawgraffiti.com or some shit. take it your own way but keep it simple and shit will be fresh. i guess in all my graff experience i have learned that all the legendary cats like saber, kem5, and revoke and all the others know how to do simples and just put their own flair too it, don't start out too crazy, just do the alphabet and experiment, and you will find what you like from sharp letters to loose letters and etc. those are my crits. time to pass the drunk out.
i was having bleed probs with sharpies so i switched to staedler pigment liners, maybe it's my paper. your shit looks super clean though maybe I'll try sharpies again. thanks!