your n kind of looks like a k or an h itd be nice to see a cap N with a slant like the rest of your letters second green one is best in my opinion
Meh, I didn't have any markers near me at the time, so I just used a pencil. I'm too lazy to edit the picture, or trace it with a marker. Sorry, I know how bad you want to diss my shit.
Mone- the n does kinda look like a k but otherwise its lookin pretty ill, got any painted? critz..? [/URL][/IMG]
Yeah I figured the second green one looks the best... the N actually looks more like a N... I do Have one painted I will PM it to you...
^^^^ http://www.flickr.com/photos/23657066@N07/2516971701/ http://www.flickr.com/photos/artfinder12-2/3795646168/ If you still want to write love, go with the top one, but work on the L.
I'll stil write it, im a UK writer, and the name means alot more to me than just a name and thanks for the crits, will keep working on it
stuck wtf do u write?! lol meyor here heri? nice throws either way.... mone i like that n from the last page, bring the split in the top to the left a bit and itll look less like a K i think... some throwshit
heri- H needs work, the E in the left one is best, your capital Rs arent doing it, the lowercase one is good though. Your I is ok, needs work though. nemor- bottom one looks a lot better. work on the M and put the R a little lower.
some of my first sketches.. i cant really give crits because i have just started and i wouldnt be able to give any thoughtful insight. im pretty sure both of these names are taken, but im more focused on learning and developing some sort of a style. Im having a hard time with letters like "R,I,B,V,G, and K" when i try a think, bubble style which i currently like most, any ideas? thank you!
you're off to a better start than most. You still suck, but you're not throwing arrows all over and shit. Basically keep doing this, and playing with different letter combos for a while. Go a little simpler on that M and lose the notch on the O.