Your getting way to technical Reel. With the shadowd hand styles, and the bubble backgrounds, and the open R's/ Just take er way more simpol man.
yeah soop drop those liitle things on the top, are they ment to look like bombs?. And make the holes in the o and p diffrent im not likeing them were they are. Plus your P looks a bit like and e. But you do have the same style flowing through all your letters which is good.
imrove it by lookin in new to graff thread or look at sum flicks of throwies to get some inspiration, looks like u dont get it for now.
Daylo- I dont know if you know about this marker but you basicly stole the name www.youtube.com/watch?v=aZgdnEquEZk . They spell it Dalo. Other then that for starters I'd looze the x things and just do circles. ShaolinNY- That shadow is mad wack, its chillen on the top and bottem. Work on making the letters the same size and not letting them grow/shrink throughout the throw. Aight then, I've been trying to work on new style for the past 2 weeks and come-up with straight shitty throws and went back to a simple bubble look and tried to fix up a couple letters. Can any body give me some help on what to do with my T?
skwint, man ive really liked your stuff except for the t, which isn't too bad, i just don't dig it man. Other than that, I like it.
Tell me about it, I find them so weird in throws, The problem with my T is I dont like bringing it out to show the other side because I get a lot of dead space and the whole flow of the bomb is off-set. So I'm still working on fixing it and any suggestions on how I would re-arrange shit would be greatly apreceated.
new name dont know if im gonna keep it yet, how is it? dent- make your n smaller but it looks pretty good i think skwint- much better except the t