i hate this so much but i feel the need to post it because besides how awkward it looks i feel like i wanna develop this style. the na isnt too bad in my opinion but the rest disappoints me. Please crit this dont crit the week that doesnt count
naked: the top of the k is a little funky and it looks kinda smushed but other than that, it looks prime to me haha.
I know, its just a pain in the ass. The vowels in your throw are a little weak IMO. particularly the e. keep the points at the bottom. you could make them like teeth if you keep'em evenly spaced and give it a little curve. you could even work out another throw to make a bottom jaw.
@ venom diggen the throw @ skewr dont know about it seen you do btter @ physph diggen the bow thing lol @ eas sloppy man maybe out line it with pen or something and theres so much things around it idk what to even think @ naked not diggen the connection but the naked simp looks pretty good @ steezfuhdayz pretty shaky but it looks pretty good i guess but not the e' with the bar thing ya know what im sayin heres a couple freestyles i did today 3ds off in both of them a bit not diggen this one at all
loose the arrows the extensions and the a' is really weird..and the s/ not diggen the extension at the bottom at all go more simple man
eas i think you should go to the new to graffiti thread and learn bars and the other basics and gemer im really feeling the first one, the CEM is nice, but i dont like the s because it is so far off, like the top of it seems to go too far to the left. but the cem is dope
I know this is gucked up but I got bored of bubble simples just thought I'd do something completely new. So many structural errors，but I enjoyed drawing it anyway.
wonky there are bars everywhere and coming from everything, just do simps and check other writers on how extensions work.
wonky: seems like there's a lot of stuff going on, maybe tone it down a bit and drop those extensions. heres a few ive finished recently, little bit of variety.
the piece that says what i think is blue is the best. do more stuff like that because its simple, but theres some things wrong. the right leg of the u could be brought up more it looks awakward, and fix that b if your using bars those holes shouldnt be so closed and small especially the top one. the e is a good idea but that one is skaetchy, just keep doing simple junk like that. maybe add a force too
it doesn't look like you even try, tempo did these during a power outage, the characters face is wonky as fuuck AND KID UP THERE ^^^ don't write sedeone or sede.... you're a birch