[Broken External Image]:http://i387.photobucket.com/albums/oo319/fuckthefame/PHTO0729.jpg weakfingers - like the cracks in it but im not too sure what it says gatsoi - those highlights are dope and i like the color choices. prob try getting the drop shadow a little more legit resk - i like the 3d cyto - killed it. those eyes and that fill are godly blacktodafuture - that character is dope. it'd be cool to see that head not be attached to a human body tho. to me it looks more like a creature. just imo tho juicee - ...throw some color in there? haha besides that i really have no clue what to say. looks like you been in the book for a while. the drips on that syloh are ill
Juice - I think those are shit hot mate, like practically every piece. Rhek - Good, maybe make the middle bar on the E a bit longer to take up some of that space Weakfingers - I like it, maybe just a little too much detail Crits on this pls!!!
the letters in the last one could use some work. and thoes shine marks on the ekilla are pretty lame.
Waste- Bring the outline closer to the letters and use alot less bubbles. Try and make the S flow resk - i like the 3d Kew1- I reallyyy like the E in the first piece, the fill is nice too. Deser- Sick! Juice- I like that style, It reminds me of ESKiMO2
Juice- love that stuff, real clean and tight letters Prea-Wrong thread homie, but that handy is pretty dope Blacktodafuture- Umm i cant make out some of those letters lol, work on that the fill is clean though Deser- Nice fillls and letters homie Weak- Good shit little to busy though rhek- Your bars are crazy wobbly make em straight and try not to round ever edge. You need to start working n some new styles cuz your not progressing much.
Alright finally I get to post a pic not on the bottom of the page. anyways here it is. kinda made some mistakes when inking it, then tried to correct those mistakes but made them worse... eh oh well. [Broken External Image]:http://a.imageshack.us/img295/2750/getattachmentaspxpt.jpg oh and that's not my tag, I was just trying different shit out. Crits?
Your dropshadow sucks man... The best example is the E, but its different on every letter.. just on the E its like 3 different shadows. Your R is an A with a chunk missing. The H is just.... there actually not much wrong with the H, its just got no style. On second thought make the middle bar bigga The E The K looks like a dude about to karate chop something in half, now thats pretty cool but i doubt everyone will see that like i did. Make the arm of the dude karate chopping way bigger, so it wont look like an arm anymore. And dont do that shine Didnt even see the line till you said something about it, wierd...
Every letter looks real good individually. could maaaaybe overlap the HAD a tad more, feels like the CH is overlapped more. But i'm only saying that as a crit to justify this bump
i wouldnt do that, by doing so hed kill the only little space left between the letters. id rather cut down on the bottom c, id like to see a close to mirroed d c.