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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Rehz

    Rehz Member

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    That looks much better, Flat! Haha I mean, the arrows, I guess that's just your style, but it looks way too complicated. This one looks real good. Maybe take out the little extension in the T, and if that is a tag to the left of it, work on that.
     
  2. FlatScank

    FlatScank Banned

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    When I use arrows, it's more for piecing on legal walls and such, but if I'm out doing just quicky burners, I just do the plain shit cause it takes up the least ammount of time, but I definately hear what your sayin'
     
  3. NosE2

    NosE2 Elite Member

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    dont call me a hater when youre the one tryin to be like saber or some shit\


    and like everyone else said...that looks a hell of a lot better
     
  4. thatswhatshesaid

    thatswhatshesaid Senior Member

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    just banged this one out super quick not the best

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    the a is kinda balls
     
  5. chiefy

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    i fucked up on the N

    @thatswhatshesaid
    the g looks nice but the rest doesnt seem to match it all that well too straight
     
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  6. Tempo718

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  7. thatswhatshesaid

    thatswhatshesaid Senior Member

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    much better, but try doing simple keyboard letters as well
     
  8. Tempo718

    Tempo718 Elite Member

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    i ono i thot that wat i wa doin
     
  9. weedeater

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    ^^reading that made my head hurt, and those arent keyboard letters, they are simple, but your T is straight hurting, the whole thing would look better if you had a round O instead of making it square and fix the T. Also, the top part of your E is dominating the bottom bar, makes it look off. and the middle bar looks like it should be a little longer. actually, just shorten the top and bottom bars on your E.
     
  10. Tempo718

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  11. Rehz

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    Well Weedeater, Nose just told him that the square O would look better, so Tempo's probably a little confused now. And Tempo, when someone gives you their crits (assuming they're not being a dick about it), try to thank them or agree or say SOMETHING. When you write "k" it just kinda, ya know, uhmm, yeah. And about the O. With that one that weedeater's talking about, I think the square O goes well, because you've got a square kind of P. And just boxyy looking letters in general, but if you were to make everything more curvy and circular, obviously the sphere kind of O would be better.
     
  12. Tempo718

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    ya rehz, i feel ya.
     

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  13. Dcicfhbimv

    Dcicfhbimv Senior Member

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    Fooling around.
    Chiefy- I like it . the "N" isn't too bad I'm sure It would look tight as hell when you get how you like though.
     

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  14. Tempo718

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  15. Worm*

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    I'm not really happy with the R. What do you guys think?
     
  16. Tempo718

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    Tempo718 Elite Member

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    filled in the res
     

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  18. Worm*

    Worm* Member

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    Tempo I'm no expert but try getting down a tag you like first, then look at the tag and work that into a throwup. You gotta start small and work up.
     
  19. Tempo718

    Tempo718 Elite Member

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    u mean sum like this? well cleaner than this.. or no
     

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  20. ChadWarden

    ChadWarden Elite Member

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    are you a woman? your shit has a feminine/homosexual feel to it.