when i ask for crits, I'm asking for crits from someone who's not a total fag, such as you. the D looks preetttty distinguishable as a D the bottom bar part could of been brought up high, but regardles... I'm pretty sure no U would look like that. if anyone with knowledge has crits, get at me,
I dont how about knowledge butttt the 2nd and 3rd S's are bangin, 3rd ELDOM is nice...so basically i like the last throw i think its the best haha but IMO on the D, the line that seperates the round part from the little bar(top middle of the D), make that line not go down as far and for the loop of the D try making it less like an O curve and see if you can get a D curve, the d curve is less extreeme if ya feel me
2 and third one is solid that third one the e is on fire . Idea when you drop that first line down for your l kick a little line inward then bring the leg of the l out with an overlapping look such as the e and m. And if I make no sense ill just draw 1 and post it, Oh and yea what naked was saying bout the d too.
thanks for the crits, y'all. mues, ya its looked good this was e tryna do my own thing with that similar idea hipe, i understand what your saying, ill try that out, see how it works n such
GO next time get a fill in and a outline and swap the star in the o to a Line or a slightly curved line Critz Please
ok new name i got the throwies down imho i'm def still improving but i need to work on a handstyle soon
Um....about having those throwies down... Try doing some that arent so blocky that more of a blockbuster with no negative space than a throw...
you will go through another 50 notebooks before you "get throws down" be sure to clear out about a year of time too... ohh and thats if you progress pretty quick.
Shoutouts...stolen idea to the next level! If i didnt do you a throw sorry but i can only fit so many on 1 page haha. either i decided your letters suck or there wasnt enough space. I think i got everyone including the hands tho throws go Naked Seldom Mues Cred Humor Venom then a bunch of ye olde handstyles
Yours? Because yours was basically a blockbuster with no negative space, and negative space is the space inbetween the letters. If you made a B witht he 2 holes in it, the space inside the holes are negative space. And all of the other space in between your letters are negative space, but you don't NEED negative space for a throw, my main problem with yours is that its blocks. Use curved lines with more movement