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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. kwu

    kwu Senior Member

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    Props bench antik naked n seder lookin ill

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    damn kwu feeling your style. the only thing i really have to say is the N looks a little awkward and parts of the A because the bars get really skinny compared to the KH.i like it man good work
    Edit: and your KH looks bigger than the N, the n gets really small. and the left leg of the A's a little awkward. Just what i think
     
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  3. kwu

    kwu Senior Member

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    aha thanks dude flicked it on an angle thats why it might look bigger respect for the input tho homes
     
  4. malto

    malto Senior Member

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    Cheers man, yeah for sure. Its Mues right?
     
  5. Wonky

    Wonky Senior Member

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    just a quick 2 letter, decided to do it in lowercase cuz im always rockin the uppercase.
    crits would be awesome
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    And this is a piece i just did but im only flickin the na because im in love with the n on this piece

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  7. malto

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  8. SkateJunt

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    well that should probably go in the throwie thread but hmmm im bad at throws so i guess ill try to crit it.well, i think the g looks wicked weird like the whole thing, and the bubble part of it on the left is too big in my opinion, and your throw is sorta wavy, not saying make it even and flat but dont have it go all over the place. Then again you dont have to listen to this because i never do throws

    And this is just what my rip big L piece looks like right now. this was sort half assed so im going to do another later in the week that will be waay better. But for now, anyone wanna crit this before i go any further?

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    RIP BIG L
     
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    i raped the forums today. well heres the finished product. has a green force but you cants really see it
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    oh yeah and i didnt do it this little dude did it
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  11. Tempo718

    Tempo718 Elite Member

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    feelin the letters on this page guys. no lie
     
  12. oversprae mds

    oversprae mds Senior Member

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  13. dankbudz

    dankbudz Elite Member

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    got bored,

    colors i dig tha RIP BIG but the el if its EL or LL or what. just looks like twirls. but somehow i new what it said before i read what you wrote... haha

    can't really crit that SPRAE, i liked ur other stuff you posted more
     

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  14. SynOne

    SynOne Senior Member

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    Dank - 3D is looking NIIICEEEE, I dig your E's and R's the most. Keep 'er rocking.

    Lil' Freestyle during class. E got hidden to much.

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  15. dankbudz

    dankbudz Elite Member

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    ^^lookin good, def. improvement since the last ones i seen
     
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  17. Wonky

    Wonky Senior Member

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    Bump for crits. Obviously quite simple but in working on structure and flow...
     
  18. PETER

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    Skewr: Best todate for sure. You're right, the E got hidden a bit... but all in all it has solid structure and flow. I like the shape and form of the letters as well. Nothing seems way out of place.
    Inside: Still struggling with your S's (don't worry they are a huge bitch. I avoid them) The bottom one is getting there. Do a few pages of just S's.
    Toops: Both look good. That E is sick imo. Good to see you postin' up.
     
  19. Wonky

    Wonky Senior Member

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    Yeh, I like the top S better but everyone tells me my S's are shit. I'll work on it.
     
  20. PETER

    PETER Elite Member

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    It's hard to get proportions and bends to look good. It's easily one of the hardest letters for me. Anything round really. Just keep fuckin' with'em. Look at how a bunch of writters fuck with'em. Do some handstyle ones and use them to outline around. It doesn't help it's right in the middle of the word so a lot of direction is directed to it. Keep it up. (the reason I don't like the top S looks like a fat gut hanging over a belt.... it's just missing a belly button and hair.)