pretty dope style their
zbre!

 

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angle the two vertical bars on the A more towards each other, so the intersect more. and the LT looks like it's angle more upwards then the PA. make sure all your letters are angled in the same direction. and the rounded top part of the P is too skinny. yo?

*edit. sorry, these crits don't really make sense seeing as you changed your image.

 

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red eyes: watch your structre/flow on that S.
zbre: i like that style, really original. Just be careful with that R. Wasn't able to really tell whether it was an R or a X. And that Z can be mistaken for a lower case E.
tofe: better but work on flow and just because you are using bars doesn't mean you are using letter structure. watch where you are putting them.

 

whats with those triangles your putting in every letter? all the letters need work but i say focus mainly on the a and r and e for now

 

Safe that a looks gross, the F doesnt go out far enough, and the e goes too far. PS No ones gonna suck your dick

 

The A is gross. i agree. i've been working on a few different ones.
the triangle things on every single letter is called flow. (doing the same thing to each letter making it consistent, like how the bottom of the S is balancing out the bottom of the E) and the F is more hidden then the E bc an F can easily be mistaken for an E. trying to make it more prominent to being an F and different. still got a few kinks to work out. thx for the crits though.

 

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i really like this. only thing i would say is tweak the R a bit

 

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leaks........ ur a fuckin gangster

 

no im not.....

 

pen freestyle its fuke backwards

 

Didnt you post this on the intermediate thread a while back and get hated on for your style ?
The F in the pen one is an E and the K has too random tail/ extensions

 

this made me lol.


@4ENOD i really like this a lot
@FUKE i'm not really diggin' the fill on the second one, too busy and takes away from the letters


here's an update, rounded out a lot the letters and added a shadow. I know it's still simple letters, but i'd rather get it right at the base level than develop bad habits and screw myself over down the road.

 

This looks much better.

 

This^^ I dont know how often i come on here and see the same shit over and over and over with the same dudes wanting crits on there letters.

 

says smog idk y idid this style though

 

how??