Eruk, go basic don't make it all wiggly and with arrows all over the place. As for your tag, same thing and don't put a crown on. Ever.

 

You are a toy

 

better, now take off your gay tie haha

 

Middle bar on the E could be a bit fatter and the K looks like an h with an erection >_>

 

fix up that E and fatten the bottom leg of the R, the U&K look decent IMO though

 

I can't do shit with colored pencil :|

 

I did this for a contest. I says Molotow. Full color sketch, A4



Here is the video of how I made it. Hope you like it.

 

thanks gpers i appreciate your feedback dude yeh that face in the O is kinda wak, i wana get better at that shit. i think all those drawings u did look fuking sick but that 3rd bottom one is my fav i think

eruk go more simple and just keep practicing...use bars and shit

6i9o- too be honest im not really diggin it, try more plain letters like i am and work with that

pitlord looks cool but its not all the most legible

 

bump

 

the first and third are fresh,your style is dope as always, you wanna do another exchange man?

 

lil freestyle 2day but I dont like the O very much

 

Gpers, I'd love to see that shit running on a train man. Simple yet effective.

Tempo, all your posts look the same and I haven't seen all that much improvement. You say you don't like the O, yet it's one you use a lot. Mix it up a little.

Edit: Pitlord, nice video man. That canvas came out super clean.

 

feel ya but man see trying to get these letters to work for me is not the same thing every time duko if u check em I do try new lil things here n' there. i dont expect to improve at your desired rate either cause I goin at my pace. post some more pics tho.

 

It takes a long time to develop letters man; I wouldn't expect anyone to develop a style over night. I've just noticed that you keep making the left leg of your M the same, and keep using that bar at the bottom of your P, which doesn't really help the letter out too much. I feel that repeating letters can slow progression... then again I'm guilty of the same thing.

I'll try to post something new later on tonight.

 

tempo your E looks better but dip the little thing on the bottom

 

@Dempo just keep workin' with them and you'll get it.
@Gpers digging all of them man. Good shit.

Got surgery so couldn't draw for awhile.
The latest.

 

cred... diggin those colours, outline looks abit messy tho and idk about the left bar of the R goin under the C

 

quickie i did.. crits, dont mind the shit at the top

 

I think Temp has got some improvement. Just keep sketching.

Cred you're getting a bit weird with your letters.

Watch your bar widths no-sleep

Been working on this for a minute, my color skills for Doc Doom are sub par at the most, but I still like the piece. Went with the pyramid-lookin fill to match the mask. Looking for some crits