Best one you have posted so far. Good progress.

 

Thanks for the crits, everyone.

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Crits? What you need is QUITS toy faggot

 

any moderators watching this shit jesus. will someone please ban this mutha fucker ^ (power ranger and billy mayes) check those posts..

okibi - ya dude that m is way better
shayk - keep to the blackbooks b4 u rock some tags

 

anyone who has a problem can fukkin battle me son

 

fine post ur handy lets go

 

bathroom tags
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older crappy one
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not me
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for the handstyle tourny i missed out on
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mesz - stick with the latest one, looks better with out the quotation marks

skayk - horrible ink (what is that), make your letter the same size and in line

say - its a start, keep working on it, not a great name though sorry

crits..

 

mesz. make the E's stem not conect up top with S, keep it like cut so you can see the end

 

Mesz, I think you should just drop the Z all together. I think the latest MES looks ill, but the Z throws it off.

 

BAGS: The name holds some meaning with the 'Z', so I'd prefer to keep it. Any ideas on changing it up? I drew a few different 'Z's at the top of the page.

 

don't connect ur e and ur s, and lose the stem on the e. otherwise its pretty clean

 

Nice fucking tag zase

First idea for the slumdog comp




I like the bottom one better what do you guys think
Oh and yes, that is green paper
I know you're jealous

 

second one indeed but use the first ones M

 

another thought Idk the first ones m is just too plain

 

zase-fking best.
yarbles-tight

p.s.
200 post

 

Zase: Looking good.

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Looks good mesz. The dots add weight to the left, balances out the box-ish Z alright.

The swirl/underline isn't adding much, but really isn't taking away from it. If you can circle your tag clean and quick that might make it stand out a little more, but thats a little played out... might catch flak for it, but when someone pulls it off right its a great effect.

Something like;

..mesz09 (circled)

might be a interesting path to look at. Keep working on it man.

Mr.Yarbles: Looks good man, need to get your hands on a cheap scanner though.

 

Hah I'm broke as shit right now
My cell phone does a pretty damn good job though
Especially on outside flicks the shit looks imaculate
I propbably spelled that wrong