i dont really like that last one take, to thin imo but the others are pretty sweet, like graffyk said "but im not really liking the middle part of the e. it's barely connected."
Dark-thats a waist of paper and a post, try actually sketching before you even begin to flick ur shit.
take- Id say A structure, either then that, diggin the simps. sico- ill man. just nice. gum on shoe- lose the fancy star, shove the letters overr, so they are inbetween but underneth. SNO...kinda thing. ........................................................................................................................................................RE Dark-try bigger? Graffyk- just not feelin that random bottom right extension 3d type thing, either then that it looks good on my end. Hepatitis- letter structure, and size consistency. And could i please get some crits on this?
Bafl follow your own crits. Learn letter structure, don't give the letter random bends and connect the middle bar of the b to the rest of the letter
Graffyk I think you're getting ahead of yourself Redeyes I like it, espically how the S and the C go together from top to bottom, and the i and o go together. Fathem Listen to take2 View attachment 520757
If you ask me, the 3d makes no sense. All your letters need some work. The bottom of the F needs to be longer, and yeah take that extension off. Bend the vertical bar of the T to make it flow with the rest of your letters. It looks out of place. The extension of the horizontal bar on your U is unnecessary. The S needs to be more like an S and less like a backward Z. The R is nice, but the top could be better. If you ask me, and again this is my opinion, you are cutting the end of the bars too much. The piece just doesn't flow in general.
^^^What that dude said Your 3-d Is wrong its going to all the wrong directions keep it going to one point
yeah lol, i have some that are further back in the forum that are just simps with full letter structure...but the bend in the f is because there was ALOT of dead space between it and the a....and the l is same thing, between it and f.
Your N is way to big compared to the other letters, and it might just be me, but there is something strange about the 3d on the I in the first one.
hpir i saw the rest of those u was working on i think that super simp that u did was legit. the bottom one that u posted rite here is pretty good imo tho i would either follow thru with the wavy shit or drop it... half nd half seems a lil goofy.
grin, are you gonna color that out? you have good 3d a balanced letters (besides n a little near the bottom right). color every piece, even if it is bad, pracctice is practice. a piece i did yesterday
diggin that second one take. neon... i dont want to be harsh but i would suggest that you rethink everything ur doing.