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just something i did quickly had to rush the flick before boosting and its off a water damaged phone

 

the silver, pink and blue, blue and brown. yes!

 

Why are M's difficult. I have another flick after i fixed the "i", but my phone is being a piece of shit. Crits would be awesome

 

MASE - the extra line in the "S" at the top looks kinda weird other than that its pretty dope

 

can somebody crit the fuck outa this?

 

^^ First painted thing ive seen from you! some small things i notice is the D is way thicker than the rest of your letters, like bar widths. your first E looks a little weird and gets skinny up top, and the S sorta moves from thick bar lengths to thinner ones, but mostly just small things. Good looks though that is a nice simple!

 

yupyup, got some other stuff but i never messed with takin pictures
i plan on thickening up my bars next time to the thickness of the top of the R. this picture makes it look a lot cleaner then it actually was.
thanks for the good looks bro

 

You should bomb more and study up on letters.

These aren't too much better but they're really clean, which got me excited. Don't know why I filled the wholes like that.......blame it on the morning.


Let's see....s it slightly too big, left side of the bottom bar on the p is fucked, a is fucked, top right leg on the k is fucked. red outlines a little off but i don't mind that as much. but come on....it's pretty damn clean. anything else to say is appreciated as long as it's not retarded.


Same building, letters are once again a little off, especially not feeling the s. but once again pretty clean I like to think.

 

all of you need to stop using colors. go get a shitload of black and white, and do like 50 straightletters.

also, learn to paint with fat caps(ny fat, or a ap cruiser if you have the new valve rusto). makes your life a whole lot easier.


edit: ^^^this guys got the right idea

 

haha thats where its atttt, black white and silver/chrome all day, onthy thing i bother to spend money on, or even rack really

 

Gotta do a skinny color outline for kicks though, it really helps with learning control too

 

lmao he has a lot to learn himself

tbh depends on who ur on about but some peoples stuff would look 100% worse without colour

 

aand thats why they should learn to make good graff without color..than do fancy stuff...

 

Yeah yeah letters are more important. It's kinda sad we must be so explicit to these chilren. (take the hint canteen)

for talking, yes the bars are fucked but that's what happens when I get bigger. We all gotta start somewhere, etc with the generic excuses

also, for those that may not know, for those that are actually racking paint and not wasting money on good shit, rusto metallics suck ass beyond silver.

 

Try a drop shadow or 3d on those ska, if you got time/paint. Would help in the sense that you can use it to even out some of those bars. Props though

 

hate black fill unless ur clean as fuck it looks ugly should just do white and black outline looks 80% better tbh