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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. No_TomorroW

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  2. FlippingChickens

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    that says fresk right? the s on the first one is beast,k looks good but i think u should kick out the bottom right more,all the other letters dont looks bad but they need to still be played with,the bottom page f is sick and everything about the k is dope except at the top part of the k sticking out to the right

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  3. No_TomorroW

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    Thanks for crits Tofe.
    Yes,it says Fresk.
    I think you should add one more connection like between T an F, and your E looks like euro
    sign so I think you can use it and make one more sketch witch euro instead of E.
     
  4. Willis1989

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    Ive tried to post a couple of my blackbook sketches and they arent appearing?
     
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  7. mexico

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    fresk_ i like, feels like the top of the R on the first one need more definition
    tofe_ good progression anyway, your background splat is cool and well executed but focus on your letters
    meko_ i dog thsoe blue throws the most, keep on rockin it.

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    latest thing im happy with, obviously needs color, etc but im just trying out these new ideas
     
  8. ..romero..

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    meko your letters are nice but you need to work on your handstyles.your writes are like 4 or 5 months farther back in progression.may i suggest makeing your m's less like this m and more like this M.it would flow better with the rest of your letters in the tag.your trying to use a soft m with that hard k and it doesnt work well.just sayin you..



    are names are so similar i just thought id throw my .02 cents in there.i would show you what i was talking about but i dont have a printer at the moment haha.
     
  9. SicK-

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    Meko- I love your style dude its really sick, umm i think your throwie could use a little work
    Tofe- Quit all those extenstions and connections and dodads and try some simps
     
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  12. mexico

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    ^the one across the bottom is tight
     
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    5min simple ....tofe if you gave your self advice you would be better.
     
  17. nickstix

    nickstix Senior Member

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    idk401- The letters and drop shadow are great. I think maybe the shading on the inside of the letters could be blended alittle more though

    Flippingchickens- Try not to cover your 'O' so much, start by getting rid of the connection between the T and F. The E seems to be the letter your having trouble with, try messing around with a lowercase 'e' or a capital 'E' thats not as curvy

    Some stuff I did for my friend...
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    and some stuff of my own...
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    Crits?
     
  18. No_TomorroW

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    Yeaahh man. Thats what im talkin about, nice and simple, Love this.
     
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    not sure at all how to post shit but heres some pages hopefully