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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Wizard

    Wizard Senior Member

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  2. Willis1989

    Willis1989 Senior Member

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    Hipe - Looks ok, I dont think the H is too bad I quite like it. Use bars and straight letters and it will help u get better.
    Buck - I like it but too busy as has been said. If you want to get better at letters then just forget colours n shit for now, in the time it probably took to colour and add effects to that one piece you could draw 4 or 5 black and white pieces and your letters will develop way quicker.
    Wiz - Looking better keep using them bars.

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  3. Wizard

    Wizard Senior Member

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  4. Willis1989

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    Better, I would make the bars coming of top and bottom of Z a little shorter, and make sure bar widths are the same, keep at it.
     
  5. Kaze

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    looking good willis, i like thatbottom acid one, maybe the I should have had a similar bend as the A though or just been striaght, looking good though man


    WIZ, like willis said dont have that Z like that, both shorten the vertical top and bottom bars, on ur top picture the 3d looks kinda off 2, just keep practicing simples
     
  6. dankbudz

    dankbudz Elite Member

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    class drawn
     

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  7. skinaone

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    nice nice nice seld is dopish
    fix that D tho
     
  8. BigFaggot

    BigFaggot Senior Member

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    dank that character is sick. piece is nice as well just the D looks a little too tilted.
    some gay ass busy work. i hide my shitty structure in stupid extensions. 3ds way off.
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    i tried to update it after i added a background but i cant delete the other. sue me.
     

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  9. Sinister151

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  10. TastyMcNasty

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    dank, shit's clean. love the character
    megr, there;s definitely structure there, but you went a little too crazy on add ons and stuff. all in all, not bad
    sinister, i dont know what you're doing, but you should stop. simple it up
     
  11. EWL24

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    wiz - ur finally moving in the right direction, but lose the extensions on the Z

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  12. blackmath

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  13. Willis1989

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  14. blackmath

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    That character sucks.... and so does that 'skyline'
     
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  16. MN Nice

    MN Nice Elite Member

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    You gotta get in the mindset of fonts. Like on the top one, Your E is curved, but yet your W and L are sharp on the direction changes. Second one is pretty good, diggin the portal theme.
     
  17. Wizard

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  18. EWL24

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    ^^go buy or rack a skin colored marker, it makes chars look a lot better

    not sure what else to do with this so
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  19. Wizard

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  20. MN Nice

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    Wiz go fill up a notebook with only pen handstyles. Then look around at other peoples handstyles, take notes, and do it again. A better handstyle does more to your pieces than you think.

    Ewl - pretty solid, cool idea for the question mark coloring.

    some sloppy isht for talk.

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