yeah, sorry didnt mean to take charge of your battle but i figured its sunday so i went for it. im voting ibu
I thought I had some good flows going on here guys =\ can I get some professional bullshit-less crits please? since I'm not getting voted for (I hope it's not out of hate) thanks
IMO the letters look like you threw a bunch of sick letters beside eachother with no real flow, it looks like some good lettering but it looks more like an alphabet then words, and the tails of some letters overlap other letters. in other words, its like 1 step away from being a nice handy... and the OF flows the other words look broken. that's all i can think of ask someone less toy.... lol
i think u should just dumb ur styles down a bit phat.... for handstyles make them smaller and simpler, like the Y and S are twice as big as any other letter, and the lines could be cleaner, the S looks like u drew it slower than the other letters, and the 2 R's dont match very well, u should just try to get ur own alphabet down pat and then try words with that before u try to make each letter different cuz u dont have that kinda steez yet.... peace