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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Fube, Apr 10, 2008.

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  1. H3TT1NG3R

    H3TT1NG3R Elite Member

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  2. Darkeist

    Darkeist Elite Member

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    shpel - fix your E
    lasek - fix the k at the end. kinda throws it off.


    and a self crit for me. the last R is kinda terrible.
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  3. klic

    klic Elite Member

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    [Broken External Image]:http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SHPELGreenThrows.jpg

    thanks for the crits guys...

    seror - im not really feeling it, work on your letters some more, maybe a line or a dot or something would look better than the holes in your letters i dont know

    lasek - youve been developing pretty good lately, id just fix your L up so it doesnt look like an I

    bilnek - simples bro, read through the new to graff thread

    ohsnap - looks pretty good, add some 3d and an outline to that and it would look sick

    reken - youve got some pretty nice letters. the bottom right bar of the r on the bottom throw on the first flick

    grfl - i dont see how that is an f. stick to the books for now, and id think about writing something else

    gezr - nice letters, im not a fan of your g though

    sarz - good flow, lose the random bump on the top left on your s

    and like baron said, give crits if you want to get them
     
  4. klic

    klic Elite Member

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    bottom bump
     
  5. osnapizzel

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  6. whosthisguy

    whosthisguy Senior Member

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    snap, the squiggle in your S, i'd say put a little bit lower than that. i see what you're doing with the face, but i think it'd still work with the squiggle lower. also work on the N a little bit. and the P doesn't really fit with the rest of the letters.
     
  7. Bilnek

    Bilnek Senior Member

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    How do ya mean letter structure????.... i am not very good with english :/
    Klic-try to color it....try to color them even if u have crappy markers....
    Darkiest-try 2 make bigger pics with thinner marker so u can better letterz
    H3ttinger try to overspray that down blue lines.... it would look better without them..
     

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  8. devil at sea level

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    go to the new to graff thread, theres alot of helpful stuff in there to explain things..
     
  9. Darkeist

    Darkeist Elite Member

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    klic - the reason i did the holes, was because when i posted before i was told to put holes in them. but whatever.
     
  10. ShIfTeD

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  11. FlippingChickens

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  12. soath

    soath Elite Member

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    Oh Snap! i said it out loud as soon as the picture loaded. the P is off, needs a lil somma somethin. I like the S.

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    these dudes rule. *all those ups are dope tho. the purple fill is sorta ugh.
     
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  13. FlippingChickens

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    yea idk wtf is so funny im just giving u shit to work on its better than saying ohsnap that shit looks fresh instead im giving u something to fuck with
     
  14. FlippingChickens

    FlippingChickens Banned

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    give me some pointers then cuh thats what im here for
     
  15. osnapizzel

    osnapizzel Banned

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    i see where you were going with the faces and they look pretty good but your letter structure is way off, like i cant read that. spend less time on colors and more time on letters
     
  16. ShIfTeD

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    soath...thanks bro, yeah...i wasnt happy with the purple fill either...idk...for some reason, whenever i use any other color besides black and white my shit looks sketchy...idk...

    osnap...i think your p fits, i jsut think you can do somthing way better with it, and dont change y0ur n, that shits dope....idk though man, i would condense it a little more because thats kinda long, like with my throws...i barely have enough to fill the throw, and trust me...you dont want to be lugging around 3 cans for a throw...try just osnap...cuz my throws are 5 letters long and it feels like im there forever doing it compared to my crew throws which take me like 3 miniutes
     
  17. osnapizzel

    osnapizzel Banned

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    ive gotten used to it, a fatcap and some bomber rustos is all it takes
     
  18. checkcheck

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    pest-not a huge fan of the color. style is alright.
    Ask-yeah i would change my name. I've had to before.
    Soath-i like it stick with it.
     
  19. ShIfTeD

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    i just started tossing this shit up and its a bitch because its either i have a quick shitty fill and i only use 1 can or i get a solid fill and it takes more then a can...but then again im a big motherfucker so its hard for me to do small throws
     
  20. osnapizzel

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    what cap did you use to do those?