shpel - fix your E lasek - fix the k at the end. kinda throws it off. and a self crit for me. the last R is kinda terrible.
[Broken External Image]:http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SHPELGreenThrows.jpg thanks for the crits guys... seror - im not really feeling it, work on your letters some more, maybe a line or a dot or something would look better than the holes in your letters i dont know lasek - youve been developing pretty good lately, id just fix your L up so it doesnt look like an I bilnek - simples bro, read through the new to graff thread ohsnap - looks pretty good, add some 3d and an outline to that and it would look sick reken - youve got some pretty nice letters. the bottom right bar of the r on the bottom throw on the first flick grfl - i dont see how that is an f. stick to the books for now, and id think about writing something else gezr - nice letters, im not a fan of your g though sarz - good flow, lose the random bump on the top left on your s and like baron said, give crits if you want to get them
ohsnap for the silver! shpel keep working on it man, i would do a better critt but its to late and i need to go to bed
snap, the squiggle in your S, i'd say put a little bit lower than that. i see what you're doing with the face, but i think it'd still work with the squiggle lower. also work on the N a little bit. and the P doesn't really fit with the rest of the letters.
How do ya mean letter structure????.... i am not very good with english :/ Klic-try to color it....try to color them even if u have crappy markers.... Darkiest-try 2 make bigger pics with thinner marker so u can better letterz H3ttinger try to overspray that down blue lines.... it would look better without them..
klic - the reason i did the holes, was because when i posted before i was told to put holes in them. but whatever.
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snap the H needs work and that swiggle arrow on the s is weak [Broken External Image]:http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN1765.jpg
Oh Snap! i said it out loud as soon as the picture loaded. the P is off, needs a lil somma somethin. I like the S. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- [Broken External Image]:http://img509.imageshack.us/img509/1228/dscn0195dg0.jpg these dudes rule. *all those ups are dope tho. the purple fill is sorta ugh.
yea idk wtf is so funny im just giving u shit to work on its better than saying ohsnap that shit looks fresh instead im giving u something to fuck with
i see where you were going with the faces and they look pretty good but your letter structure is way off, like i cant read that. spend less time on colors and more time on letters
soath...thanks bro, yeah...i wasnt happy with the purple fill either...idk...for some reason, whenever i use any other color besides black and white my shit looks sketchy...idk... osnap...i think your p fits, i jsut think you can do somthing way better with it, and dont change y0ur n, that shits dope....idk though man, i would condense it a little more because thats kinda long, like with my throws...i barely have enough to fill the throw, and trust me...you dont want to be lugging around 3 cans for a throw...try just osnap...cuz my throws are 5 letters long and it feels like im there forever doing it compared to my crew throws which take me like 3 miniutes
pest-not a huge fan of the color. style is alright. Ask-yeah i would change my name. I've had to before. Soath-i like it stick with it.
i just started tossing this shit up and its a bitch because its either i have a quick shitty fill and i only use 1 can or i get a solid fill and it takes more then a can...but then again im a big motherfucker so its hard for me to do small throws