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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by KAMO, Jun 21, 2005.

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  1. grime

    grime Member

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    This was my very first time going to the wall. the letters didn all come out the way i wanted them too...but, i deff need crits...and any tips on can control.

    ai22.photobucket.com_albums_b326_ludacrisman7_p_00001.jpg
     
  2. STES

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  3. revid!

    revid! Elite Member

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    stes work on that simple style
    looks okaayy
     
  4. tocsscott

    tocsscott Member

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    grime for your first piece i think its pretty good.
     
  5. RUDE_Bwoy

    RUDE_Bwoy Elite Member

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    work on your letters and where you put your bubbles and extra shit
     
  6. STES

    STES Member

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    grime nice work for you 1st time i love in mate but try sketch new letters and dont put that much bubles ok
     
  7. rel

    rel Senior Member

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    crazy-can control looks decent but the letters are iffy. it also looks like you just put the highlights in random places. look up a tutorial on highlighting or something.

    also use bars.
     
  8. STES

    STES Member

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    rel what you think bout me bomb STES
     
  9. AR.aerosol.tk

    AR.aerosol.tk Member

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    Stes- i like it but the E needs some work
    Grime- real nice for first piece
     
  10. STES

    STES Member

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    ar.aerosol thanx ye i have work on the e that is me new bomb style and i still working on it mate
     
  11. Skesh

    Skesh Elite Member

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    Lol bump for this
    more then one year ago. still not crossed out

    not bumping it for crits ;) just for laughs
     
  12. JETPACK!!

    JETPACK!! Banned

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  13. Cin123

    Cin123 Senior Member

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    ai259.photobucket.com_albums_hh311_frankeecin_graff2019.jpg
    ai259.photobucket.com_albums_hh311_frankeecin_graff2018.jpg
    adore is mad good in tdot hes everywere/big ups to adore
     
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  14. sacwacko

    sacwacko Elite Member

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    looks good.
    hard to read tho.
    work on structure.
     
  15. mIoK?!

    mIoK?! Banned

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  16. Cin123

    Cin123 Senior Member

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    miok not feelin the shin
     
  17. mIoK?!

    mIoK?! Banned

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    yea i no

    i learned from that shit

    ima throw something else up and the shins gonna look better

    thanks for the advice brah
     
  18. Derogatory9o5

    Derogatory9o5 Senior Member

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    BuMpage.
     
  19. Cin123

    Cin123 Senior Member

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    miok- yo ur bombs r ight but
    yo the difference between ur
    tagz and bombs r far apart
    cause u got some bumpin tagz
    proz to dat
     
  20. JETPACK!!

    JETPACK!! Banned

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    why is talking like an illiterate mexican the new fad?

    miok, bring your letters a bit closer so they overlap a bit. you've got a lot of dead space in between them. work on your shines, and dont outline them or your drips in your last flick. also work on your drop shadow a bit.