wow im an idiot..thanks for pointing that out krumpet, i didnt notice it before. and thanks sneez, i get wat ur saying now

gatsoi i agree with krumpet bout the right leg of ur R, and also the left leg of ur R looks like its going directly straight up, i think it would look better if it was on a slight angle to the left going up

any crits on these would be cool, think i fuked up the drop shadow on the 2nd pic, dont think i should done the little bit at the top left of the D plus its just sloppy

 

first throw up

 

ska go more simple.

desr: first one's got better e. you are on right tracks to develope a style, just go and play with letters, all i can say.

 

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I now realise that I should've gone with a lower case A... but meh, a bomb's a bomb

 

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thanks sneez, appreciate it, il keep working on em. i dig ur throw there but the only letter im not really liking is the E, maybe its just me but the middle part seems to small, i like the wrest though

venom i dig that i think it looks dope

demond toss the first 2..use basic, striaght forward bubble letters for throws for now, that bottom one is osmthin more that should be int he black book and atleast it has bars in it, even though they r all over the place, seriously if u wana get better start out using keyboard letters

 

@phat: nice one(s). diggin' the 't' alot.
@sink: forget everything you think you know about throws.
@kaze: dope. i'd try a different lower case 'e' on the second one, and the last letter is confusing me.

 

thank arose, iv been trying to mess around with lower case E's in throws but been having som trouble lol, and the last letter is suppose to be a lower case R

 

thanx... i'll just keep on pushin!

 

the pink marker was dead , just a simple throw up felt like posting.

 

Fuck stene
Kaze I like your throws they're looking good as usual
Sink.....

 

Crits please? Really sloppy and I'm really toy..

 

thanks mild, appreciate it

stene just keep practicing simple throws

Felony id lose the pointed bottom thing, try som simpler stuff

 

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that wayyy better then before, im surprised. i think that E would look better with out that little attachment on the top right bar though. that seems like more of somthing that u should post in the blackbook section though, but again who am i to say wat is wat lol...this is alot better then that other shit though, keep it up and try doing even some simpler stuff like straight keyboard letters..they r harder then they look to make look as perfect as u can make them

 

critz would be appreciated

 

does that say sekor?? i know of a sekor around here..anyways i think the K and R would look better if you did the bottom part normally for now, for somreason it looks better on the K but just try doing it normally for now

for the toy throw battle, i dont like the N or the drop shadow very much

 

yea ight bitch fuck u

 

Gotta do something about the top one