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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Fube, Apr 10, 2008.

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  1. ComradeR

    ComradeR Member

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    Kaze and Friidom thanks for the crits, yeah I usually have trouble with spacing and keeping some letters the same. I don't like my N as well, looks more like a messed up H. I'll be posting up more stuff tonight, fix a few things on it.

    @skee, your first pic is blurry, cant see crap yo, I can see the second though, stick with simples, not feeling the pointy crap under each letter
     
  2. Friidom

    Friidom Senior Member

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    skee-on the second one try to make the leg of the k more like the bottom of the e's, you kinda made the bump smaller and its throwin it off
     
  3. TastyMcNasty

    TastyMcNasty Elite Member

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  4. blackmath

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    I definitelyyyy need a better pic haha, Ill try to go back up in the day but I would be seen for sure. And you can only see it if your pretty far away, cause the buildings so high. But it was more of a chill adventure night than a bombing night
     
  5. H1P30N3R

    H1P30N3R Elite Member

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    aner - def a unique look I dig all the letters besides the a. I think if you change up the leg on it and maje the circle a bit bigger it would help, so that it is atleast a closer size to the other letters. my 2 cents

    crits trying out a one liner...

    ai1204.photobucket.com_albums_bb409_heyzues07_IMG_20120501_201159.jpg
     
  6. Kaze

    Kaze Elite Member

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    ^that looks sick i think, maybe try to make your R alittle smaller so it matches ur other letters. i like how your R comes into ur P and makes the middle point for your P. maybe put something in the middle of your O but either way it looks dope.
     
  7. DEMPO

    DEMPO Senior Member

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    dank wow dude im impressed
     
  8. Big Africa

    Big Africa Member

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    Critz been drawin this all day
    ai1171.photobucket.com_albums_r554_sjmason92_2012_05_01213425.jpg
    @ kaze thanks the e does look way better
    @ Friidom i been work on my letter consistency
     
  9. Kaze

    Kaze Elite Member

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    it looks better africa, keep practicing man, maybe try and do something with the right leg of your R. try to get some simple ideas from other people...just dont take exactly what they have and use it and then call it ur own. its looking good, keep it up...glad i can help in any way
     
  10. TastyMcNasty

    TastyMcNasty Elite Member

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    bottom page bump. and like HIPE said, A is a little small.
     
  11. H1P30N3R

    H1P30N3R Elite Member

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    bpb
     
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  12. no-sleep

    no-sleep Senior Member

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  13. Norfsuthr

    Norfsuthr Elite Member

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  14. no-sleep

    no-sleep Senior Member

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    i just thought of it afew days ago im still tryin to develope it
     
  15. MN Nice

    MN Nice Elite Member

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    Bump. Go bigger!
     
  16. TastyMcNasty

    TastyMcNasty Elite Member

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    no sleep, i actually kinda dig that. work at it more
     
  17. no-sleep

    no-sleep Senior Member

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  18. KehmONE

    KehmONE Senior Member

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    IMG00065-20120502-1453.jpg

    Ignore the M, working on it.
     
  19. nine514

    nine514 Member

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    ive seen better from u kehm
     
  20. Kushbombing

    Kushbombing Senior Member

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    No sleep- I can def see spins style in ur letters bro.
    Ur Whole in the E and the end of your H.