@naked.. I like that first one a lot yo keep it up @gerb.. those pieces are all over the place... take a step back n watch how the other kats on here have been progressing through simples and bar consistency. the throws are alright but the r aint working you dont need the extra kink in the leg... keep it up tho
Junt: go simpler on your letters and thicken them up, random ass extensions and connections are weak. And for your throw, don't connect the middle line of your b to the r, it makes it look like an e. and don't do the flat top, just keep fuckin around with it. Colors: diggin the first piece, real nice fill. just make sure you're keeping your letters evenly spread out. Wonk: actually feeling that top piece. Your N could've used a little more room and less space on your D and E
@ gerb drop all them extensions off those first flics freestyle tryin something new after looking at it a couple times on here makes me hate it
lol, its dope broski. just gotta pay attention to the hights of those letters. i wish those lines were bars thou, i think bars would look better lol
^^^haha fer sure man them letters are all different sizes....and definatly bars woulda been way better i was stoned when i did it tryin to get on a different level haha but thanks dude
Wonky: That top piece is interesting. I like it. Run with it. I'd like to see what you do with colors. Gemer: Dont hate it. I like the flowing vibe of it. I think it would work well with a Rime style to it. Edit: SynOne: Both have potential. I like the top one better, but that R needs help. The R on the bottom one is looking a bit like a B.
I feel, you and agree with both, the top R was actually going to have to top loop like like the top of the S, but I fucked it up, can't undo the pen lol. As for the R looking like a B, I know, I just didn't give the leg enough room for the extension.
gettin better skewr just watch those W's, try writing EW over n over till you find a way for them to flow
not gonna throw in colours till i get all the kinks worked out. the R turned out like shit and im still not stoked on the rest of it. crits would be appreciated.
crits on some throws i drew today? Picture 210 by Stewart Stevenson, on Flickr6693103331/]Picture 211[/url] by Stewart Stevenson, on Flickr
Syn, try different EW like whats his face said. Try and maybe make the left bar of the W go up and right then kink left. If you know what I mean. And to those trying throws...try more. Do more handies. And do more simples. Throwies come wit time.
a little different to the other one. [Broken External Image]:http://i803.photobucket.com/albums/yy314/lachyw/005-1.jpg then a quick piece i sketched just to go for a paint tomorrow and a little freestyle above it. [Broken External Image]:http://i803.photobucket.com/albums/yy314/lachyw/008.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i803.photobucket.com/albums/yy314/lachyw/007.jpg
rasek, handstyles are off tha hook. And i also saw some of your posts in intermediate thread, i have to say you got some nice bombs. keep rockin on!
New name. Changed it to make the tag flow more and my sketch looks better with it as well Crits appreciated. [Broken External Image]:http://img268.imageshack.us/img268/42/img20120116144623.jpg