thanx to res4 and shifted for the crits, good advice, i tend to get ahead of myself, art is about practice and self dicaplin, i just gotta practice more
i dont know what your goal is homie, we all have goals, set goals fer yourself, like how you want a style to look in your head then draw it
i drew this guy up a while back, and i finally got up with it today, but imma ghetto ass, so i have no digital camera, i had a disposable, so when i get the photos developed i b postin that shit here th sketch i used tho[Broken External Image]:http://img189.imageshack.us/img189/6868/006yt.jpg i got em developed [Broken External Image]:http://img188.imageshack.us/img188/2153/007xkk.jpg
cyto- I wish the middle part of the S connected to the bottom part. Your D also seems unproportional to the rest. your E's also confuse me a little but, but it has a general sense of flow I feel. keep it up heres my new shit- [Broken External Image]:http://img710.imageshack.us/img710/7982/1003201s.jpg
[Broken External Image]:http://i801.photobucket.com/albums/yy292/michaelstolz/IMG_8042.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i801.photobucket.com/albums/yy292/michaelstolz/Picture2.png some exchanges i did a month ago
new attempt, rockwell extra bold tho, times new roman iz gay^^ [Broken External Image]:http://img716.imageshack.us/img716/595/001rpt.jpg k is obease on th frst one, plz dont hate on it, im aware.
[Broken External Image]:http://img695.imageshack.us/img695/1039/002nf.jpg this is my friend's/ fryer420's. he's wondering how his style is... crits?
Seek, a lot of people write that name. Just like that too... I actually know someone in my city who writes almost the same kind of hand and a very similar throw to what you posted in the other thread. I still think SEEB rocks that 'SEE' combo so hard that you don't have a chance in hell to work them letters any harder. Until then, your shit's gonna' just look like somebody elses. You got a lot to live up to. Res, you need to paint one of those. Seriously. They're so clean.
[Broken External Image]:http://img716.imageshack.us/img716/595/001rpt.jpg The second one is the best. just draw that 100 times no joke sketch that out 100 times adding littlle bits and peice and youll progress far.
here some sketches.. and my stuff for me and REWT's exchange....the fliks are shitty had to use my phone...its hard to tell but the last two are filled in silver and its hard to get a desent flik of it... and there is little shaded blue spot all through the black areas... wish i had a camera that didnt f*** up all the time lol but oh well... View attachment 573721 View attachment 573722 View attachment 573723 (inverted) View attachment 573724 View attachment 573725 View attachment 573726 CRITS: *KRON- good letter structure but your lines are a little sloppy... work on your steady hand. but nice letters... *AKOS- i like most of your stuff but work on your S's a bit... other then that good stuff... *ABEONE- i like the character, but work on your can control. and with the sketches i like the styles but work on your fills... *CYTO- the first e is kind lost... make your letters stand out... but then again maybe its just me.. but try to make your letters stand out... good style but needs work... *DROPING- good style you need a little more hand control...your lines are a tad bit shakey *RSE4- fill them i wanna see the rest of it lol
Weak's just sayin' that cause he likes the credited bite on the background. Jk. Repetition is key. Memorize that shit. Then paint it. And remember, you'll never progress if you don't paint. So paint. Even if it sucks. We learn from mistakes.
[Broken External Image]:http://i202.photobucket.com/albums/aa41/steve-o_070/0706001524.jpg A new style/idea I was playing around with. Excuse the rough sketch, I didn't have a pencil so I had to do it with a pen and roll with the mistakes.