Zarb We've told you so many times, do something with the space in the top of the A. Maby a line coming from the R so that it doesn't look like it's massive and takes up all the space behind the R. Same with the A in Lasto, the top is just waaaay to big.
hey bob.. i have looked through all the pic. threads.. and i havnt seen shit from you.. you run your fucking mouth like one of those fucking rich bitches.. so fucking post up or shut the fuck up and get the fuck out of here you fucking joke!
work on the letters.. good.. but the letter structure could be better.. and for a throw i would just write expo.. or eo for a really short throw..
queezy ur e's are lookin nice and da ur throw has potential, just keep workin on it.... fuck sometimes i hate givin crits it makes me feel all snobby and shit like "ooh you should do this ooh you should do that, i know best" lol, but i like getting them =) anyways..[Broken External Image]:http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/4599/12964090.png i write lerch, not lerc, but im stuck for an h
looks like you're trying to bite too much. it's real sloppy. your Z looks like it has down syndrome. don't like the hole in the O... or the shape of the O.
calm down sir, I'm giving you crits. well I've seen those letters before, it just looks like you bent them(the I and the E). and the two letters that I haven't seen look baaaad. why do you have your I on top of your Z? it's unnecessary and no lookey good. just try keeping your letters going straight, and the same size. and take that huge hole out of the O...bout it.