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2nd. H (round the top maybe?) and I
1st. E but round the top
new P.

 

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Dont overlap the A

 

Yeah, my R's structure sucks too obviously haha.
I fixed it when I actually bombed, it's in the bomb/pieces forum.

 

everything on this page is silly start over fools

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pewp

 

Paper shit looks good, painting needs work. why no 3d on the throwup you painted?

 

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Yeah, I know SBAL, I just think the purple fade attempt was even worse than his letter structure.

 

hipe the top is the best one but dont go into your P so much, if you know what i mean.

 

I know what your saying .. I brought the curve to far in ... thanks

 

You had it, then you lost it....
remember the E you did before Leaks told you to make bigger?
do it, and maintain it's form, because it looked good.
Oh, and next time drop the dot of the i on the bar of the i, like don't make it float just yet.

 

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obviously, I need crits.. please don't say something about the shadow I know it's not right, just trying to get down letter structure.

 

Rype when i was lookin at yours i was like "yeah, yeah, yeah, no" No flow on the E. Do a lowercase one to match the other letters.

 

double post meh...
First time doin this throw in a public area, not very happy but whatev

 

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for my homie that has landed above clouds recently.

 

one evil- keep yr letters the same size
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crits

 

ill try it here in a few thanks

 

Sorry to hear about your buddy evil