It just isn't well-executed, in my opinion. Some letters are top heavy, some bottom, but none really have balance. Each letter kind of stands alone. It seems like you kind of have an alternating pattern, which would make the eye zig zag to read it. And the letters aren't as clean as that could be. But really. I just think it's too much too soon for you.
yeah man it's all just experimentation at this stage. I was doing alternating letters ure right... so that's a no on the up-down-up-down thing. thanks for the crits dude
just for that H you'll probably be getting my vote, soej [Broken External Image]:http://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos...40829923_100000507545549_634642_1144917_n.jpg
Funny thing is, thats how i make my essays when i write at work and what not. i write in all caps all the time.
no this is not my camera being blurry....held 2 pens together [Broken External Image]:http://img513.imageshack.us/img513/6857/imgp0082b.jpg