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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. getpaiddaily

    getpaiddaily New Member

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    A little thing i made up for a friend how is it?
     
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  2. Mildstyles

    Mildstyles Elite Member

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    Nice shopping cart neer
    that first one isnt even bad yo
    But you need to work on your R's cuz both of them could use some tweaking
     
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  3. DaFugg

    DaFugg Senior Member

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    I hate iPhones. Autocorrect I grammar-retarded.
     
  4. DaFugg

    DaFugg Senior Member

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    FULL grammar retard.
     
  5. BigFaggot

    BigFaggot Senior Member

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    thanks no sleep.
    Naked, What shopping cart? hahaha, thanks man, and i know the Rs need work, i wanna kick em out more and make the bottom bar that comes back in more symmetrical with the N's, but i always run out of space.
     
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  6. MN Nice

    MN Nice Elite Member

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    Its a dog kennel. I'll put $5 on it.
     
  7. BigFaggot

    BigFaggot Senior Member

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    hahahaha, you guessed it meng.
     
  8. MN Nice

    MN Nice Elite Member

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    Awwww yeeeee.

    Mild, you never said you WON'T take the bet, so therefore you owe me 5 dollaz.
     
  9. 4menace2society0

    4menace2society0 Banned

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  10. BigFaggot

    BigFaggot Senior Member

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    sear, both are fresh as hell, seconds my favorite.
     
  11. DEMPO

    DEMPO Senior Member

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    no matta who ya familys are everybody needs familys yall.
    sear, those balls had better be gobstopers a somethin close 2 a jawbreaker
     
  12. H1P30N3R

    H1P30N3R Elite Member

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    diggin that 1 tempo looks nice and clean keep it up man
    crits please changed the o up like suggested and I know its a little sloppy

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  13. Mori

    Mori Senior Member

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    Gettin there hype. id say drop the 3d for a drop shadow or just a bold outline, and id take those little cuts out of the inside of your letters where the top bar of the k conects and the bottom of the o and the p and r. and i don know how i feel bout the o looking fat like that. try a more old school looking o, kinda like a flat topped tear drop shape if that makes any sense.
     
  14. H1P30N3R

    H1P30N3R Elite Member

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    word Ill try that out man ... as long as I am progressing atleast somewhat it helps. thanks for the crits man
     
  15. EWL24

    EWL24 Senior Member

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    before u guys start telling me about structure u should know that this was just for fun
    and yes, i know the letters r all wack, :)
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  16. Kaze

    Kaze Elite Member

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    hipe- i like your P and R but not really feeling the K. try to make the dip thing on top of your p more suttle like it is on the R. the 3d looks off at the bottum of your P and the bottum left leg of your R but it looks good elsewhere. you know with ur P and R how at the top it has the dips, maybe in the centre part of the 2 letters the 3d should have the dip too if you get what im saying, may look better but i donno, could fuck it up too but maybe try it out.

    EWL- i think that looks dope haha its a cool idea for sure.
     
  17. dankbudz

    dankbudz Elite Member

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    sear top ones dope, could do without the A pms ing all over the place
    bottom ones dope as fuck too, but that tounge is flat as fuccck
     

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  18. uknowigetup

    uknowigetup Senior Member

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    I'm not digging some of my follow through lines on my bars. It looked a lot better with pencil shading but fuck it. Drips are ugly too, can I get some critz on my letters?
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  19. dankbudz

    dankbudz Elite Member

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    then don't do em, def aint helping your letters
     
  20. cred1384

    cred1384 Senior Member

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    @Emune ^ He has a point. Also for your letters the bend in the bottom bar of the E looks wack. Those extra lines aren't playing into your flow at all, try to position them so they look more natural if ya get what i mean.
    @Dank So clean, damn good work.

    Freestyle messing around with some new colored pens.
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