looks like shit, it goes from thin to deformed, not thinner to thicker. that extension on top of the E also looks like shit. your 3d is also fucked up in some places
I like that syn. Your improving. Get a little more funk with your W. Crits? Not so sure about the cuts in my bars.
erase the M, move it to the left, and then make it so your U isnt hidden. you got a bunch of space to the left on that page, so use it
i like it but maybe make both parts on the bottom of the M the same andy crits on this? Picture 123 by SkateJunt, on Flickr
Ok seriously. Are you outlining your letters in pencil and then going over in sharpie, or are you just doing it freestyle with a sharpie? I find it hard to believe for someone who can't even make straight letters. Break down your letters into bars.
i'm guessing you mean the Kemos one? now that i look at it that Tiger one i sent you is rather shite.. Fuck knows to be honest.. just trying some new shit i guess. will blast out something half decent tomorrow. whole fucking day off! GET IN!
thats sweet, day offs are always fun... i get to wake up @ 330. And yes, i meant the kemos one. o and its you vs extinct in the last round of the round robin, so hit him up and decide on a battle
sup guys, first time postin pics, just a quick sketch im playin wit, any crits are apreciated, ill be colorin it later tonight so sorry for the light pencil lines. (thinking of a limeish green fade to a yellow that ends about halfwayup but still has a yellowish inline around most the letter, with probally a grey letter outline..not really good with 3d yet so ill prolly leave that off.)
handy i been gettin up with.. sketch im about to color (yellow/greens,white,grey outline) some other ishhh...
and it looks better. those inside lines tho, your overusing them, and some are in the wrong place. id take em out or only use 1 per letter. i used to try that shit and everytime i did it i regretted it...
thanks mues..yah try cutting down on those inside cut lines,use them in spots where it comes to a point but not more than once a letter(or a bar)until u get a little more control in your letters.
I'm getting that feeling too. I just thought I'd give it a shot after seeing this Sufer piece like on his R, but I'll prolly just scrap it.
i looks dope, but notice he did it only once? not over-doing those things is the key. i make the same mistake all the time.
lol theres some major differences, and reasons why and why not to use those cuts. In your case, a straight letter, with no movement, you have no need for those cuts. The reason why he put that cut there is to imply the movent from the top of the curve bar to the kick, also making it all one bar ya dig? the only reason why he use it once is becuase thats the only spot that called for it
top bar of E sucks, top bar of T is lackin on the left side, make it mirror the right, and make it the same width. K and W are obese looking, top bar of S is weird, and the W and T still sit lowe than the rest... theirs now a weird space in between the W's outside bars, make the middle part go up higher, and maybe make those outside bars at a sharper angle. peace