gov that throws looking pretty chill mrkurto i think you need some work with sketching, and a little with painting any crits?
Lol don't judge my handstyle on that wack pen scrawl I randomly put inside the "M" ; crits? I have yet to venture outside of my blackbook:
First post here. I just got back into writing from a 3 year break. I sketched a quick outline. Nothing special. [Broken External Image]:http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/5438/dsc00103lw1.jpg Start hating.
scratch lookin safe, maybe a tad bit wider and make the first letter a bit more legible? meta dont make your E drip down like that vice yeh, work on your I (by the way this was a dissed legal wall and i know the people who did the pieces.)
Quickie PEEG throws. [Broken External Image]:http://img386.imageshack.us/img386/8328/dsc01092tx5.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img366.imageshack.us/img366/6596/dsc01093ia2.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img386.imageshack.us/img386/7788/dsc01094um1.jpg
Gov- I think it'd look better if you kept the arrows out of the O and the V Nine- I dig 'em, the P and G just seem a little off to me. [Broken External Image]:http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/6748/img1225yq1.jpg
do i see the recent cile throwie battle influence/bite? look at the albert fish vs cile battle in the battle thread if you dont know what im on about, if so don't bite, if not, i was going to give some crits but then i realised you didnt so crit next time sa- looks ok, basic letters, work from that and also your might be a bit plain, try to do it so you can see the whole letters, or at least the top peeg- i do agree about the g, try both upper and lower case and also try to keep the vertical bar of the p more pronounced, could be confused for an e, e's are plain nothing good with em, nothing bad and also their looks like you tried to put drop shadow in the holes but theirs none on the actual letters, just realized you didnt quit but im not gonna delete all this so crit next time toy- new to graff thread and bars for simples, simple bubble letters for throwies and make sure you crit others if you want crits nesk- think that says as, work on your control alot, you got alot of drips and some not very clean lines, also if it was a legal wall you should've done a whole throwie, the s doesnt seem to bad and i like the fact that the tops are kinda the same but backwards, i dont like that bump on the bottom of the a, try and rework that, personally i wouldnt do crosses on letters, experiment with lines or circles or ovals but that personal preference, get some good can control down and that could be pretty nice edit: also anyone up for a throwie exchange? trying out new style
how can i possibly give crits after letsgobombin?? he covered the whole page. tono - i like that throw but your f is kinda small disregard my retarded L i dont what happen when i was drawin that. i finally found a K too. crits??
flare - that looks mad dope but DONT BITE!! and your 3d is messed... peeg - really smooth except for the g nesk1 - nice two-letter but work on not dripping and get some better paint maybe? work on your 3d a lil as well. my two-letter.....crits.. View attachment 415971
my friend showed his throwie alphabet to me from his bb and i bit his f but i guess he got it from that battle? idk its supposed to be shadow... and your 2 letter is ill. nice and simple. looks like you write scrap? letsgobombing. ill do an exhange with you? do you write your username?