im going to put this color with the second pic. [Broken External Image]:http://a3.sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hpho...739808100244_539650243_20039946_5061958_n.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://a3.sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hpho...737558700244_539650243_20010276_5912418_n.jpg seyar-Dope shit man you really got that style down. reach-Best thing so far. lope- That perts sketch was going straight and lost the arrows it would look sick. sech-Dope sketch e needs work and lovin the b withe the fire fill. strangejourney-dont have to do what im sayin but straight out the D bar, lose the extensions on both sides, and lower your t.
looks like alotta ppl been gettin better, styles have improved alot or either keep gettin better, talkin bout the ppl on the last page. some shit for talkin. View attachment 612864 View attachment 612865 View attachment 612866 View attachment 612867 View attachment 612868 View attachment 612869 View attachment 612870 View attachment 612871 View attachment 612872
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yo, your sketches are dope, bottom character is fly, and I like those simp letters. also are you all crazy ? slotr? really?
Sear by StuckInTha90's, on Flickr Sear by StuckInTha90's, on Flickr A good 7 hours put in today to catch up, been slackin
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good bold letters reach, reminds me of letters i started with. keep it up. thin em out over time an add more flow to em. tezr, sick characters man, it was said how your Z to R looks like an A. still ill good piece sear. try having the bar off the S to the middle of your E start out under the E and come through ontop, rather than the other way around that you have. it dosent look fly with it sitting ontop of the S to ontop of the E in my eyes. raise the section of the A were the bars meet a bit higher, its got a midget swag goin to it and the deadspace on the A dosent suit up with the middle of the R or S. maybe try a bar coming on a 45 degree angle downwards off the kick of your K to make it pop out more and empasize the ending of your piece. itd balance it out more with the extension on the bottom left of your S as well plus give it style points. darker forcefield. solid lettering hypor, nothing to say really
Shit man I really aint feeling either of em to be honest, but ya i got you, Im gunna go catch another tomorrow, try and see what if I can come up with something decent, and also your exchange is in the making, just aint rushing it.
oh word, i completely forgot about yours. sorry G. ill have it in your inbox tomorrow and you must have edited the first piece in afterwards. or i missed it, all my crits are directed towards the second piece. i like it, its dope. your best in recent memory. not much positive to say about the first though, keep at it!
tezer- thanks dude any suggestions on how to stop doin them sharp style, im already tired of that shit myself. by the way nice piece man, piece exchange? destil- if ya down for another piece exchange msg me.
just try new letter styles. smooth the flow out with the bars. rather than end the bar boldly and start another off the corner of it. smooth out the bar on the ends or have it flow into another bar starting off the end
reach- the first sketch has got flow, work from there. aight. View attachment 612968 View attachment 612969 View attachment 612970 and a throwie. View attachment 612971