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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. pleasedontstayr

    pleasedontstayr Senior Member

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    someone resize that shit... does it say jos?
     
  2. bzerkyetii

    bzerkyetii Member

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    resized myself
    and it says joc
    short for jocke
     
  3. bzerkyetii

    bzerkyetii Member

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  4. pleasedontstayr

    pleasedontstayr Senior Member

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    put something in that O. or make it more defined like just a circle. and round the C get rid of the bump on the top of it. it makes it look like an s
     
  5. bzerkyetii

    bzerkyetii Member

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    why would i make it just a circle
    thats boring
    and i dont see how my c looks like an s
     
  6. ManikOner

    ManikOner Senior Member

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    If you want that to look better sayin Joc

    Restyle your curve of your J and make a hole in the O. make the C a little more pronounced
     
  7. <[(Smokers187¤GS¤WM)]>

    <[(Smokers187¤GS¤WM)]> Senior Member

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    Yo got a point with the o being boring and all but just put like a dot or a line to clarify it for us, once you're here for awhile we'll know who you are and no need to question the o not having anything in it
    And the c could pass for and s if u squiggled a lin in from the bottom left
     
  8. TheToy

    TheToy Elite Member

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    This could look dope if you do a hollow with a Pink dot or something big and just sign it so people know it's JOC.

    I like it for its simplicity.
     
  9. ViniVidiVici

    ViniVidiVici Senior Member

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  10. bzerkyetii

    bzerkyetii Member

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    thanks
    im still working on the kinks
    ill post some more tommarow
     
  11. CareGr

    CareGr Member

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    [Broken External Image]:http://imgur.com/Yqqf7.jpg
    Act as if the handstyle isn't there :3
    Had to get a new name, and I liked these letters and it doesn't seem like it's taken.
    Crit?
     
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  12. bzerkyetii

    bzerkyetii Member

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    the puzzle pieces make it seem kinda childish
    and maybe straighten out your E and V
     
  13. CareGr

    CareGr Member

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    Straighten them out?
     
  14. crailtap

    crailtap Senior Member

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    make everything level is what hes saying. worry less about your fill, and more on structure, but you're def starting out right with the simples
     
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  16. crailtap

    crailtap Senior Member

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    work on making your bars straight, and the bottom one i would like but the M and H look a lot like t's, try to make the M more defined especially.
    probably take the bottom part of the top P off for now, it doesnt seem to work with the style of the MEH
    and i like the throws
     
  17. CareGr

    CareGr Member

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    I'm trying out different fills so that I'm not bored with just doing simples :p
    And thanks, I usually don't rotate the letters, but felt like doing it (obviously it's on purpose :p)
     
  18. crailtap

    crailtap Senior Member

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  19. Etcha

    Etcha Senior Member

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    I see what you mean. Damn i was sloppy. Thats pretty bad for me. But thanks for doing that and throwing in some tips. Ive also noticed the E is much wider than the other letters, so im gana try and fix that.
     
  20. RES4

    RES4 Elite Member

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    ^make the m like your e but sideways u know?
    thats the only bad letter, the rest are nice. keep at it