skeletor: firs pic i dont like anything in it sorry. second pic i like although i think if the D was a bit bigger it would look better cuore: i like your 3d but i agree with rib not to convinced about the lil bits sticking out ovan: like everything but the left leg of the N the bottom of it just looks awkward to me Peter: i like the color scheme like the A and the N but after that i don't like your letters at all to be honest
finally did a half decent stylized letter one, but i don't want to ink it yet cause im not satisfied with my E. any suggestions for it?
if it where me I would make the I and the e taller to match the height of the rest of the letters. you could do this by elongating the dot of the i (which looks kinda like a cheereo at the moment) and the top of the e... maybe something like this? just a thought. also I noticed the base of the i gets thinner at the bottom. not to be picky, but you're pretty even across the board except there.
not quite sure what you mean by the E? as in turn it sideways? and yeah i realized the I later but that's a quick fix
no, the photo is turned sideways and I don't have the ability to flip it sorry. but I think that height and shape might fit with what you are going for (with it up right.) worth a shot anyway. just doodle it a few times to see if it gives you something you like in the style you're going for. :edit: just was looking at the p. you could use that same basic shape to fashion an e as well.
peter they are watercolor pencils, dont have markers need to order them online. messer id do it but dont think you want international shipping
thanks shroom here it is inked everyone gimme crits please.. personally the 3d on the I seems a bit iffy to me
this is a style i came up with on the 13 hour ride back from florida, got home, sketched it out a last time, added color and heres the result, comments welcome, especially since im workin on a more complex style than most of my other work which i should post but later when i take flicks edit: flick aint showin up for me, let me know ill upload to photobucket and repost if needed after resize
i actually like that style, suits the colour scheeme well, cant really read what it says, but thats not the point, with a bit of refinement that could become something original for you and, with some work, ill respect you for coming up with something original
same as McSatan, i dont like the nubs. btw whats a bottom page bump? im not really in the scene and im dutch.
When you post something at the bottom of a previous page and then a new page starts without getting crits or views, so you post it again.