Letter structure's weak, chocie in colours is odd, but like the pattern you got going on at the bottom, handy's not too bad, just don't overlap to much in future maybe make the letters a lot 'less higher' and a bit 'fatter', less shadow, better choice in colour, few more tag's and 'handy's' and it should work...
yeah work on your letter structure and straighten those lines up.. Dont use too much color for simps. If it is a simp...
Yeah True I'm not really feeling that small e in between your letters either, try an upper case E and make it the same size as the other one, and take it easy on the fills for now. Quick sketch I did last night, sorry for the shitty flick I should have scanned it but Im lazy. View attachment 520546
^^ The stuff inside where the shadow is looks strange, and the shadow or 3d or whatever on the T is fucked up, i'm also not likin' the thingy on the F Well I haven't sketched in months, finally got some free time, a simple throw View attachment 520567
droping- yeah i like the fill but as everyone has said, letter structure, and i agreE with an upper case e. Fetusr- I like it, but maybee extend the U right bar, just to keep it a little more structured. Provin- I like the overall look of that sketch...but the hell if i could figure out what it says...maybee start with simpler? I got this one from last night, my bars were starting to get un-even, im going to redo it tonight, any crits on this though?
Gum on shoe- why the fuck did you repost that shit. looks like something any one person could do. style please.
so it lacks style? don't you think i already knew that? maybe some crits would help?? "anybody could do that", pfft.
to be honest, though, i don't see the point in posting pics of really super basic sketches like that snore, even in the toy thread. it's good to see some type of attempt at progression from basic bubble letters, because anybody can do those, and doing them over and over again really won't make you any better... just my own opinion.
For real dude? I think the only letter that's a bit off is the M, because I forgot to put a little curve for the middle part of it. Bump for more...constructive crits. Gum idk what to say about style, take a look at some real simple bubble letters, those look like bubble letters 5th graders draw in class when they're bored, not trying to insult, but there needs to be some definition of style and graff in the letters. Maybe look at the pops cereal logo and try that. Make your letters bigger and more poofy I guess might be one way to say it. I agree practicing simple helps, but your letters don't seem like a good platform to start. I'm trying to find the words for crits but I just can't lol, sorry, hope this helps.
I like the snore. Modify the S and the e to make them a little more than plain simple and it will look pretty nice. Nems fix that m it doesnt look like one. maybe make the e more complex but the n is not soo bad. s is oke maybe you could add i little more too it
well, the point of that sketch was to see how i can pull off basic letter structure, i wasn't trying to blow anybodies mind, i wasn't trying to do an ultra complicated wildstyle. i was just trying to fix up my structures before i start pulling off crazy ass shit. i do appreciate your opinion, though.
gum - Your shit isn't hardcore enough. Nems - lose the spots, work on every letter. The e looks okay. The N and S are both better than that M, but not as good as the e.