Peg city- that is a sick simple, but id tilt the s to the right a bit, so its more in line with the rest of the work. Graf- Im digging the first ones fill and style. the second one flows nice, i jsut dont really like the style. cold- i like that, maybee make the word buble completly around the "cold!".
cold-maybee fatten up the L's lower bar? just a though, but im thinking if you kept bar consistency on that L the piece would look a tad better emptycan- i like that simple, but the left side of the last t bar, should continue the 3d over top the o. to me the way it looks now is that the 0 i coming out of the 3d.
spam: i think you should try to change the p so it fits in with the style your using. some of mine, not that good, crits? and one thats not finished
For fuck's sake man! Stot keep on working. Your 3D is alright but your letters are pretty bad... You lack style and letter structure. Ask yourself if you think your work is good before putting it up. By the way, it's "for the lulz."
damn reep! I'm feeling the style! Keep it up. I can't wait to see what a burner of yours looks like. Sorry for the double...
u guys told me 2 stop doin 3d but i caried on and came up with this [Broken External Image]:http://www.urbnfabrik.com/images/members/2722/fullsize/20091026102457Photo188.jpg
What do you guys think?? -Pear- that is good for like art. Quit trying things that are way out of your league. That's advanced shit youre doing....
Pear-it looks good. Nice shading. But that border is way too thick. I think adding a nice color fill in those letters could look good too. I like what you're trying to do, but its kind of advanced. Try doing some simpler letters, but with 3d. Keso-lose some of the extensions and serifs. Its got some potential underneath all that. I'm not too happy with the 3d fill. But oh well. Simple is good.
Nice man, you gonna 3d it ? or yah leaving it as this ? Good work though, needs a few tags and it'd be sorted...
cold-i dont like how the o is so much bigger. cocacola- i like it but i think the s should be bigger would make it more proportionate, and i would bring the e out from under the t some. im diggin it though. StayHyE- keep up the simples.