@Freddy Why's it taken from that strange angle? makes it hard to see what's goin on

@Tasty Thanks for the props, nothing helps motivation more than those.


i'm in love with the R on this one

 

about that...

 

row.... please dont make videos yet... the way u fill in ur letters makes no sense to me, just go left to right and try not to lift the marker off as much as possible... also the color balance really doesnt work, u cant use dark blue and outline with black, with sharpies u need a light color as a fill and a dark color as the outline... showing how u used pencils to sketch that out and rulers and erasers to do that just makes ya look more toy

 

Meant to say that to Tasty my bad. I Haven't bitten a thing purposefully, but if you find anything like it i'll gladly tweak mine up. No point in working and progressing at developing a style if it's close to someone elses, that'd be a waste of effort.

edit: ^^ No sarcasm in there, just don't want to be misread.

 

need to work on the a and p

 

a small dedication to SLOTR.. crits would really be appreciated....

 

SOAP - and the S and O, think about bar concistancy and your A you try too give it style but the other letters not thats weird so dont do that

 

sounds good thanks for the crits I'll deff take them into consideration and work on that

 

@Physh You should make the middle piece in the O the knife and have the jester stabbing it.

Exchange with Mues

 

the R is overlapped to much other then that its pretty fresh man

 

yeah i fucked up big time with the R, the stabbing the was the first thought i had but i don't know why i didn't go with it... but how's the blood, dies it work??

 

ya i like it maybe next time try crazy colors and then have like skin peeling back with blood oozing out seen a few artists try ish ike that

 

yo hipeoner
been lazy lately so it isn't clean, hope the letters are good though

 

I'm really diggin' this right now.

 

Crits, tried to go over it in pen but the shit wouldn't write so I ended up making my lines look worse than they really did. Well...Crit me up.

 

Those curlicues and nonsense is a little out of style with the simple.... Also try beefing up that I and even out the size of bars overall.


Wish I had made the E's a bit more even in size, any crits though?

 

Soap - the way the right bar on A goes out makes too much space between letters
Cred 134 - like the piece and 3d
Zeek - no need for the extra bars and shit just make more simps
Freddy - Thats phat as hell

I think i kinda fucked my W a bit on this one

 

Zeek - Just realised you had a quote from someone else in your post so nvm that extra bar stuff I said lol