drop the g to a connection and the lil face and you got a solid handstyle now get it up everywhere.

 

i would drop the lil thing you did at the end of the E and A, just keep it simple like that and work on even spacing and cleanliness and it'll look good. and you can only improve from there.. also try working on a M with the points in the middle, there just aint much you can do or anywhere you can go with the middle of the M you gots.

yo dude.. .that red omega you had last page was hoot, where did that steeze go?


thought i posted this, guess i didn't.
9oh- did you still wanna put it in the battle thread?

 

thats clean dank, nice

 

woah woah woah before u lose faith

1. Im practicing/improving the one u saw. I just dont see the point of reposting it over and over. Plus ill only post it if it is something i am proud of (or it doesnt look like shit)

2. Always gotta work on different styles. Its more fun that way. This is my simple style and just wanted some feedback.

Could u rephrase that?

 

the middle line for your a runs into the g which made it look like a connection. If it wasn't meant to be just clean that up a bit.

 

It was ment to be a connection but i forgot to connect them until i was writing the A

 

uhh, idk haha. Got crits, which was what I was looking for. Got a better E,and S just waiting to jack some markers today.

 

Few different styles I was playing with.

 

kehm, looking good, try spicing up your letters or something...keep the handstyle you got there its clean and what not but work on another one that is a little bit more complex...dont over do it, just smalllll tweaks and shit

 

here's my tag, a shitty one, but it's a starting idea.

 

^ lol i like how you throw the rock through the glass at the end. lose that thing coming outa your O that loops around, go more simple and for now make ur Z look like a normal Z, it looks like a weird 5 sorta, your k is decent and ur R is ok just keep working on it and maybe dont have ur k and r hang down like that. keep practicing man, you will see improvement.

 

^nice D haha. I dont think that K goes with the rest tho.


photo-10

 

thats a funky tag norfsuthr, i like it, whats the letter in between the O and the J though? a handwriting e or something?
mildstyles, i dont like that E at all but the other letters are dope, maybe try to spice up your N abit or somthing, play with your N and D or somthing.

 

Its a W tard.

Mild, try a K with a downward extension like so

 

He told you to play with your d!!!! I am in agreement about your k naked.

 

oh shit how did i not see it was a w before

 

Crits? I fucked up the T but it was cold as a mother fucker last night