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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. centrysam

    centrysam Senior Member

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  2. DEMPO

    DEMPO Senior Member

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    not done yet but its for her bday ;)
     
  3. HESK1

    HESK1 Member

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    work in progress, any crits?
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  4. EWL24

    EWL24 Senior Member

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    lol i hate when that shit happens, ive done that before too
     
  5. SkateJunt

    SkateJunt Senior Member

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    haha i got so excited when i though i came up with a sick style perfect for slaps too, such a let down
     
  6. Coleo

    Coleo Elite Member

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    welll ya
     
  7. Bas

    Bas Senior Member

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    @Axil: PLEASE work on your inking skills. Look at those characters of yours (or any or sticker you did, for that matter) and you tell me where to find a straight line, because I can't find any.
    Don't work on stickers yet, work on your general drawing abilities before you do anything else. Go draw simple figures. Circles, squares, balls, cilinders, etc. There must be hunderds of tutorials out there on the internet which you can study and learn from. Once you've mastered this, go practice inking. Same deal: look up tutorials and practice until your hand falls off. Once you've improved those basic drawing skills, go study letters - both handstyles and throwie/wildstyle letters - because you have no clue what you're doing right now. Then go practice drawing simple letters. PRACTICE A LOT. While doing this, also practice your inking skills. Once those letters are starting to come together and you're comfortable drawing these, try to go a little more complicated. But remember to take babysteps. The exact same goes for characters: study a lot & practice even more. THEN you can start thinking about stickers.
    It's not a shame to study and practice, we all do that. And it's quite fulfilling to see your improvements when you're looking back. But please don't litter your city with those crap stickers of yours.
     
  8. TCV

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    Humor As for structure it looks alright but the I would made the top/middle of the R a lil bigger or something.

    Patience inside the E wtf is that??? The gap in the N looks a lil big in comparison to the rest. I personaly woulda made the C a lil bigger too. and u suck at drawing stars sory.

    Hesk I'm liking it so far but I personally would fatten the bottom of the S
     
  9. Willis1989

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    Bark - If you didnt connect letters at top on first one it woulve been nicer, left bar on A is wider at bottom than top other than that I like.
    Gerb - Id work more on letters than with colors and effects
    Dempo - leave out bars on T and 1st E and make I bigger
    Hesk - Characters are nice looking forward to seeing it complete

    I started writing LEWD, writing WIL or WILS is a little jailbait if im going to be painting ever so chose a name with letters I like etc.

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  10. Willis1989

    Willis1989 Senior Member

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    Can I get crits on this one too?

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  11. dankbudz

    dankbudz Elite Member

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    practice. practice. practice.
     

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  12. KehmONE

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    You're in a jazz group?
     
  13. always crushin

    always crushin Moderator

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    alright because the mods here are a bunch of fucking nazi's and wont let me make a thread to help you guys improve ill start posting here frequently as well as the intermediate thread i dont know about you guys but i bust atleast one sketch an day anywhere between 1-8 sketchs a day roughly so the first piece of advice im going to give you draw draw draw
    anyone want critiques/exchanges send me a pm or make a post but it has to have a picture attached if ur going to waste a post just asking me i wont respond with that being said
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  14. HESK1

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    a few changes, little progression. critit.
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  15. always crushin

    always crushin Moderator

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    the bottom of the es is weird id define it a bit more also the top part connecting the s
    also lose the arrow even out ur letters more height and width wise ur h and e are huge
    if ur trying to do a drop show its off in some places if ur tring to make the bottom leg on the h right side left corner peel id put it in tthe top of the h left corner
     
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  16. TastyMcNasty

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    Don't think i'm at a level to crit tasty or crushin.
    @Crushin that S is perfect.

    Trying to refine my shit and develop some form. The "D" letter (fuck your jokes MNnice haha) looks funky to me.
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  19. AstoK

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    fark slotr, i always thought your sketches looked wild, now that you've started inking them, faark, keep it up man
     
  20. Kinger79

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    kehn: i love your style!