PASE BT X NOVER GWB colloabo -pase with the letters and theme, me with the inking and colors
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Nover...get the fuck outta this thread haha. That's dope as fuck! I'm real down with the colors.
Some whack shit I've been doing

 

Apart from making me look like an idiot tilting my head.
First one: A hides too much of the L
Middle: E looks like an F
Bottom: Really diggin this one. I don't know if the bottom bar of the G should bend that much.

More bars and stuff



I messed up the DEW part so I blurred it out...

 

@nover why did you post that in here and the intermediate thread when you know it's not toy lol??

 

cause it is all about bein seen

 

with shit like that it aint hard to be recognized

 

i like that nover posted in here, there needs to be some super crazy awesome shit in here sometimes hahaha
and nice job nover, it looks sick

sol - the top i think would be the best if it didnt have the connection from the A to L to E, it throws u off and it just looks bad. the second one is also cool but the E looks like an F with a bad extension

crits please

 

Exchanges

slotr


naps

 

yo gasr ill try to have yours done by the end of this week, just been busy n shit

 

werrrd, yours is a couple pages back if ya aint seen it yet

 

quick 2 letter mess and some guy...



Gasr, you fancy an exchange?

 

I'm definitely down, what you write?

and a quick sloppy free so you know I can still do my own shit

GASR GKK

 

this page is looking good. Nover that drawing is crazzzyyyy

exchange for broke

 

Some shit i did, bored for Mn Nice

Exchange with Vims

Dies Throwy

 

maybe try taking it back a step, draw out some more simple letters, you will see improvment, keep at it dude

 

Nover - Dope piece!
Gale - Nice, the bottom ones best IMO
j-one - like the top piece but wouldnt have known tht was an R without you saying
Kaze- Like the Broke, flows nice, thats what I hate about my pieces every letter looks like a different person wrote it, you letters all go well together
TBS - The alien type characters dope
Halo - on the 4eyes theres too much neg space between Es and Y

Really dissapointed in myself and the shit ive been doin recently, need to buckle down this weekend.

 

Bump.
@Cade, there's a little too much negative space between the C and A. idk how you would fix it though

 

Gasr, ripping it up as always.
Kaze, as i said before i really like the flow there. without sounding like a total faggot i like the playfulness of the letters.
Cade, i think you need to take the back of that C in a bit. will bring the whole word together more.
6i9o, you're getting there, keep at it. something that helps me with straight letters is simply use a ruler. or anything with a straight edge... also, the width of a pack of skins is pretty good for getting letters down on a A4 page.

quick sketch idea for the chatter.

 

nice page, hardly sketching but heres my little addtion, the acidic/broken bits detail is bitten from gers, love his stuff
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