^ your C seems bit to rounded,all your letters have straight lines pointy corner. the C stands out a lot in that. add to that the fact that its way fetter than your other letters, i think it makes it stand out too much. I know i shouldnt be saying much, but thats just my opinion

 

The C is supposed to stand out. It breaks the standard charachteristic of the piece. I should have colored it a different color or smaller or something for yall to pronounce that it was on purpose. Anyways its a work in prgress. I did one with a bunch of extensions and shit last night but got shitface and fucked the outline up supremely. The R and the E were hella steazy and the ACH sucked cock, and on this one its the opposite for me, Ifucked the R and E and did okay with the rest.

 

Quoting for truth. Who would've thought?

 

"they always said god is perfect and man is not, well guess what, man made boose and god made pot.so why not,im not fuckin wit needles or smokin a rock. cannabis, my medicine so i focus alot."

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fucked up the bar in the middle good!FUCK

Photo 239 by ripmb, on Flickr
Train tracks from nowhere!haha bullshitin

 

did you really do a wiz khalifa simp........ smh
and that handy looks like walt disney got shitfaced and try to graff
finally, get rid of the gay arrows that curve around the bottom of your shit. all of them. on handies, simps, everything.

 

@reach that usually works better if you do it with the middle letter, as in the "a"

 

i wish i had my camera, shitty laptop flick does it no justice...

 

lol you drew a dragon and shit. You best color it before you take another pic.

 

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reach= if u wanna do the c try doin the e too
toop= i like the 2nd n 4th real clean nice structure

 

tempo - to pointy, dont like it
reach - hmm i like it cause everyone is expecting that you did the A.

 

just a simple... crits

 

sema.. youve posted that bottom piece before.
but try outlining your top piece with black, see how that looks, should make that teal really pop

 

thx man usually the stuff i paint turns out nothing like that tho lol since i freehand all painted shit unless its legal

 

@sekn work on keeping all your letters on one angle if you're gonna lean them to the left or something. it kinda seems like they're starting to straighten up as the piece progresses. your shadows off in some places too. good keyboard letters tho, but your S and N look a little disproportional
@acer that piece is sick although i don't really like the c just because the extentions kinda make it look like a G. and like the other dude said throw a black outline on the top piece
@reach that C should be straight its too rounded off for the rest of the piece. the extensions kill it too, especially on the H
@sir2you i like the fade and teos pieces on top, only thing i can say is the F seems a little too Far away from the rest of the letters. i like the bottom piece too i'd say thicken up the t tho and the K seems xrushed between the pedestal and O

 

thanks homie, i was lookin for crits and got no one gave me any, so its appreciated.

 

i'll colour it later, looks like a laptop flick is as good as it gets at the moment >.>



fucked up the R and the I >:[