thanks for crits outline n a few scattered bubbles from behind set it off, i know i posted the 1 be4 its just same page. ill post the flik of the black when i fix this fkn scanner. -sekn try given the letters some motion in the next one -nasty shts tight like the vanishin point to the dragon some colourin will def make it pop
i don't write this i saw a tag on the street and used the letters in a piece [Broken External Image]:http://dl.dropbox.com/u/13341191/a/100_2415.JPG
^^ thanks for the crit on the 2 lives fury ok i can't tell what half of those letters are but i do like the general shape to them and the flares on the ends of them...well you do them better than i do put it that way i think minor details like bar thickness/thinness in places and the characters tooth that is higher up and a bit off on the right handside it kinda draws my attention to it not being level maybe i have obsessive.complusive.disorder i'm not sure lol nah- noice!! 1's a bit pap though arrrh kid! tasty- i really like that actually, nice style on the letters graff 2k- you see how nice it looks when you first look and then you see the s trying to hump the e a little bit more than the k and the n, i reckon a bit more even space on the first two would be banging or alternatively tighten it up and pull the k and the n back in as close as the s and e sema-i like it overall, but i think you slightly have the same problem i have as you get in to drawing a word or whatever the letters get bigger as you go along...watch out for doing that and yes take a less blurry one next time think i'm getting like lush in my old age more decrepied and perverted lol, i know its shit but i like to share my cock drawings: [Broken External Image]:http://img37.picoodle.com/i58b/potts/16fq_c80_u905z.jpg
hmm i think it would of looked better if each letter was a single PENIS or the whole piece was a single PENIS kinda like this
^^ oh i'm so glad...i fucking love lush! he's my style of bansky, and thanks sema lol and nah i'll bear that in mind the next time i do any penis related shit haha
uncolored, plan on coloring it somehow. looking for crits on cracks / ideas for extensions. my letter game is decent so I'm trying to delve into the process of learning extensions. View attachment 611584
same-no cracks, dont connect your letters, get a clean smooth line n structure before you try to overstep your means
Cant tell you guys enough, practice and self evaluation is the key, you are all pointing out each others mistakes whilst the piece you just posted have the same problems, if you can crit others you can crit yourselves. Proud to say all of you have great potential, just keep woking on letter structure, sit down with one word and adapt to the letter forms how they work with each other, the word shape as a whole ya dig? Once you got how to teach yourself down, all you need is time and effort
my last fuck around sketch with this name, gonna start writing kasc, the word i chose for my battle wit swae [Broken External Image]:http://i1234.photobucket.com/albums/ff404/Sce161/Mobile Uploads/1313121381.jpg
^ shakey lines take ur time or try usin a roller point pen, i would also straiten the t out n extend the bottom hook of s to fill dead space the lean thros it off
bar width on the T is thicker on da top than on da bottom. and try making your E regular before adding bends etc
^^ fattening up is working in'it tempo not to sure on the two little joint lines on the t but the shape and the sort of sway of the letters looks well bud
arse ur comment made me want to do some changes to the fill, i like it but what yall think good or bad. finishing touches