Sope- You're gonna be tagging wayyyyyy more than your going to piece, so work on your tag. I think the red ones best, the perple and green one has good 3d, but all the holes and add ons are distracting. And why is the P shitting out a blue leg in the first one?
sope- what sbal said. wils- what zookyook said kew1- it looks pretty clean, but yea. you fuked up on the 3d. Does is Say ERK?.
sope i think you should just worry about doing black and white pieces for now intead of coloring. Its better to have solid structure as opposed to a solid fill, thats just my opinion
/\ agreed, shadow needs work aswell bud, e's shadow is gettin off, like that green n purple one above tho, Wils, mega improvement from last time I seen y stuff, top one is sweet, And kew, love your e's man,
I find it helps if you draw the shadow as part of the letter, rarther than put it on as a last thing,
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Doug, the second one reminds me of a clown and too much acid, this isn't necessarily a bad thing! Keep it up bro!
doug- that 2nd looks like a clean fill, but im not digging all the yellow bubbles in your 3d. some1 passed this huge books to me it was like 15"x20" and i had it sitting in my closet for like 4 days with just the SERG on it. then i added the character and the Rising Sun backround last. Heres is a new Steezy im working on, its a colab with my homie SPILZ. if you don't notice, i fucked up on my drop shadow baaadddddd.
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bottom page bump for crits prea: great straight letters stigma im sorry but i cant read it, to much going on. fucktheflame: top on is clean but u needa work on ur tags, bottom one is clean too
that pink one is dope, somthing about the R bugs me but i dont know what stigma- you're trying too hard, do less. Do nothing at all prea do something more with that A, the rest i a pretty dope simple dirty doug- it look good but the 3d is kinda lame in my opinion, the yellow doesnt really go well with the rest of the fill.