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Kay this time (yellow thing) wasn't sketched .

 

Discretion : I thought, at first, your R was a fucked up H, so yea.
Oh and for the block letters, practice your paper before.
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Keep working on your simp. As for your throw, I don't feel like the R and the E match up.

 

rase-alot more paper before u paint it
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new style, i couldnt think of a good r to match...crits?

 

lizard i like it

 

thanx for crits. i found this spot walking home and it was chill so i went home and grabbed a can to go practice

 

Is it a U or a V ?
Anyway, I don't like the bubble under the U or V, but I like the rest.

 

its a V, bubble v's always look like u's...what about the r cuz i have a feeling it sucks more then the rest

 

yeah, that R is weak. Eliminate negative space

 

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quickie, not a fan of my R

 

My eyes r burnin.
Seriously, I can't see any of the letters, and if the first is a S, def work on your structure.

 

negative space?

 

No, that S is straight.
Not my style, but it's not bad structure wise, Safe.
The R could be a little better, maybe try a capital one.

 

use more eye friendly colors. jeeeszus

 

ZEST- Finally gettin it dude! someone who actually takes advice, i like it.. keep workin at it tho.. always room for improvment!

 

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Is it getting better?

 

kew-drop that w now.
backtodafuture- black white chrome blue and red
sevr- i dont like the bottom of the V but dont get me rong she is nice and smooth