keep working on it.

 

any crits?

 

That colour was under me, I left it and covered around it, used it as my fill.
And yea, the A is too covered, but like I said it was a throwup. 4-5 minutes max.
Heres another 2 min sketch, with less covered letters. I'll upload new things when I get home.
http://i251.photobucket.com/albums/gg310/INFOE1/DSC00102.jpg

 

I see you creeping behind that wall *****!

 

me?

 

Looks like you overkilled it
The a looks kinda like an af combo
The c is just odd looking
and you have a lot of wierd extensions that shouldnt be there
I think if you stick with the simple structure that it has instead of doing all those bumps and curves and stuff it'll look alot better

I know you're alot better than me so I don't wana say much haha
But that's just what I think take it or leave it

 

^ i agree %100

 

.... dude its fine, keep painting and itll develop already pretty clean. but the a does look kind of like an af combo

 

make the fill solid.not all airy and all over the place like it is...i think it would look better.the style has promise so i mean keep working at it.but it would look ten times better if your fill was cleaner.

 

I think you need to lose the empty space,
even if you just fill it in black.

 

ill answer this for him
the wall we painted absorbed montana paint into the wall and i kill all the rusto with my huge throw

 

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My 3rd time painting, didnt have enough room for my R and K so I did a two letter. My A is horrible, but I dont think my E was too horrible.

 

word i forgot that cement absorbs paint.maybe buff the wall before hand then...

 

it was random how were we supose to buff it with out rollers and if any one goes down there go farther in the tunnel i put up 23 hollow SW's i coudnt get a pic =[

 

calor- i honestly think your style is fresh, fill it in better and add high lights... highlights in most cases makes it pop and makes it look better

 

eskimo - throw some 3d on it too

 

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That is some ugly shit, Soe.

But good can control.