well with my K i was trying to pull the bar out to make it thicker, i see other people do it but they get "nice job man" and that, can you explain why my bar thickening or thining is bad? :s Like an example, View attachment 590457 see how his bars are thicker and thinner at times, how can I get good at this? :s because i just tried and i guess its bad.
bc. i know how to do it better then you do. start with bars doing the same thing, same size, then work on shit like that.
valid question... basically if u want to make thicker and thinner bars it has to get thicker at a constant angle... like the bottom left of safers S... u can see where he was sketching that bar into the next bar (this is what u should be doin, i do it too) and it gets thicker gradually and it makes it look more convincing, ur K just looks like a wonky triangle pretty much, its all about keeping flow.... heres one from me with some thick to thin shit goin on... im not sayin this piece is perfect by any means lol... but if u notice the bars go from thick to thin at an even and constant angle... so it just looks better, to me at least, dont take my crits as fact if u dont want to, im not an expert
yo prea im pretty much diggin all the letters man, you just might want to work on proportions a little bit more. i know you know that e is just not fittin in there. everyone says i need to work on my 3d (fury inparticular) so i gave it a shot, just a lil rough sketch. critsss would be appreciated [Broken External Image]:http://img835.imageshack.us/img835/691/imgp3297a.jpg
Looking much better zewl. The e in the top one is messed up on the bottom part where it curves up, but good otherwise. Prea- SPace the letters out more, the E is too hidden. and that R kicking out so much messed it up. Just give the E some room and it would be fine
assuming the 3d's goin straight down, the far right tip of the L should have some 3d on it too i think a piece exchange is overdue with us zewl, wuddyasay?
well i have work all week but maybe just a straigh letter or whateverr ill see whats up but yeahhh im down no due date
Prea the second one looks pretty decent.. I like the flow of th letters bending(besides the E)...The First one is wiggidy wack because the P is garbage... Fix it lol... The one on the Bottom has a nice P... Bust Battle
crits please. i know im bad.. sucks bc im not getting better :/ zewl, you missed 3d on the w on the lower.
[Broken External Image]:http://img401.imageshack.us/img401/7907/scan0001kj.jpg messing around with different letters. Any dope writers write Repo?
dude take it slow youll get better..but not after writing your name 8 times..id also change my name to bukkake i mean youve kuake already so... and safe isnt really a good example for bars n shit.
try to make the corners of your lines so pointy if that makes an sense. In my opinion, you shouldnt even be trying this stuff yet. Get your handie much better than do some throw ups before you start these. Everyone sucks in the beginning, most of my stuff still sucks. Just try to get out of the Mega toy phase before you start piecing. imo
i dont like throw upping that much. im more of a piece guy, and im just mad because i took a week off of writing because i was busy than i come back and my stuff was just not that good
Hahahahaha. You're getting hella better man, just keep at it. Zook is right in his crits. Also, the W is kinda messy. Just work on the straight down stuff in pencil and go back over it in marker. The small straight looks better than the middle as well. You are very much on the right track, keep it up. And anyone wanna do an exchange? Zook?